User talk:Hanyangprofessor2#Deadline 5 (Week 9)LIHAOCHANG HANYUANYUAN

:* Avoid overlinking: Link only the first occurrence of major terms (e.g., "Republic of Korea," "United Nations," "Korean War").

:* Mention when Korea's served as a non-permanent member of the Security Council, or held other important positions.

:* Mention inter-Korean cooperation at the UN (ex. Panmunjom Declaration). (It's ok if some content is the same in both your articles; if it is relevant to both)

:For the South:

:* Many references are from South Korea’s Ministry of Foreign Affairs. This is okay for dry facts about South Korea's policies, but Wikipedia prefers mixing sources: academic articles, independent journalism, or UN reports, to enhance neutrality by showing how independent sources discuss this topic

:* Convert the link at the end of "Development and Humanitarian Aid" to a proper footnote

:* Use bullet points sparingly. For "Key areas of engagement," consider prose or a concise table for clarity.

:* Ensure images have appropriate captions and are relevant. The current map image is generic; consider one more specific to Korea’s UN involvement if available.

:* Expand coverage where necessary, especially regarding peacekeeping (you should mention the Sangnoksu Unit, for example), hosting of major UN events in Seoul (e.g., GGGI headquarters), Security Council roles, etc,

:* Incorporate all relevant content from Korea_and_the_United_Nations#South_Korea_and_the_UN_(1991–present)

:* Add a "See also" section linking to related articles (e.g., "Foreign relations of South Korea," "North Korea and the United Nations," "United Nations Command") to

:For the North:

:* middle of your article has no references, please add them

:* Format your references. "Document Viewer" as a title is too vague — readers should know what the document is; each citation should specify the resolution title (e.g., UN Security Council Resolution 1718 (2006), not just “Document Viewer”).

:* Using ==== (four equal signs) for small sections like "Humanitarian Cooperation" is usually unnecessary unless the structure is very complex. Stick to ===Subsections=== under each major ==Heading==.

:* use academic references, not just UN documents. Ex. https://ciaotest.cc.columbia.edu/journals/ijoks/v1i1/f_0013371_10868.pdfYou can also cite independent reporting (e.g., BBC, Al Jazeera, etc.)

:* incorporate relevant content from Korea_and_the_United_Nations#North_Korea_and_the_UN_(1991–present)

:* It's important to discuss how North Korea did not seek UN membership for decades, insisting it was the sole legitimate government of Korea, and only shifted its position in 1991 as Cold War dynamics changed

:* Discuss the challenges UN agencies like WHO face in North Korea. What makes operating there difficult? How long have WFP, WHO, and UNICEF been active? Add examples of projects (e.g., emergency nutrition support, disaster response?)

:* Discuss why North Korea has not contributed troops to UN peacekeeping missions [https://www.nknews.org/2015/05/north-koreas-million-man-army-potential-peacekeeping-force/ Interesting article here]

:* ?No mention of UN human rights reports The UN Commission of Inquiry on Human Rights in North Korea (2014) is a major part of North Korea–UN relations and is missing here.

:* Try to list the most important North Korea-related resolutions, and link to the relevant lists such as List of United Nations Security Council resolutions concerning North Korea

:* See Also: Add links to related articles (e.g., "Foreign relations of North Korea," "Sanctions against North Korea," "North Korea and weapons of mass destruction").

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:35, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

::Dear Professor,

::I applied the changes, please let me know if they are ready to publish. Thank you!

::South Korea and the United Nations

::North Korea and the United Nations Fatimald (talk) 05:18, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

:::Excellent progress. Here are the things to fix now:

:::for the SK article:

:::* Lead needs slight expansion and polish. It should better summarize: UNTCOK and the role in post-WWII division, Korean War & UN intervention, Observer status, Full membership, Major areas of UN engagement

:::* Minor grammar/wording edits are still necessary throughout (e.g., “helped funding the support needed by the UNDP on 2024” → “provided funding to support the UNDP in 2024”). Long sentences (e.g., about Security Council service) should be broken into shorter, clearer prose. The sentence: “... although a formal peace treaty has never been signed, there are other efforts among the Korea's...” should be split and rephrased. Also, correct: Koreas not Korea's.

:::* Image caption: “Participation of South Korea in the United Nations” is too generic. Specify the context of the image (e.g., the “Women, Peace, and Security Symposium in 2023” or similar).

:::* Most references are still South Korean government sources. Consider adding at least: A UN report or data dashboard (e.g., UN Peacekeeping factsheet), some independent news coverage of Korea's UN engagement, and preferably, at least one scholarly paper about Korea’s international diplomacy through the UN

:::* replace reference 7 - Wikipedia cannot cite itself. If reusing content from another Wikipedia articles, just use the same citations (copy them)

:::for the NK article

:::* the lead should briefly summarize: Historical stance of DPRK on the UN (initial rejection of dual membership) UN’s role in humanitarian and sanctions measures, and the current state of relations (limited cooperation, ongoing tensions)

:::* “Among 2006 and 2017” this is unclear. Should probably be something like this: “Between 2006 and 2017, the Security Council adopted multiple resolutions...”

:::* reference 9 has some strange formatting errors, please check and fix

:::* replace reference 6 - Wikipedia cannot cite itself

:::* some references have incomplete metadata, missing author, publisher, and/or date.

:::* optional: the following is missing and would be very good to add, if you can find references for this: DPRK’s use of UN forums for propaganda - A few sentences could mention how North Korea has used the UN General Assembly or Human Rights Council to make political statements, often denying human rights allegations or criticizing the U.S.

:::_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:55, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

::::Dear Professor,

::::I applied the changes that were recommended, please let me know if it's ready to publish now or if I need to improve anything else.

::::South Korea and the United Nations

::::North Korea and the United Nations

::::Thank you! Fatimald (talk) 13:59, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

:::::@Fatimald Please double check whether all issues above were fixed. I still see many issues above still unresolved (ex. Wikipedia used as a source). Please reply, one by one, to each of my remarks and tell me how you addressed those issues. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:27, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

::::::Dear Professor, here are the changes I made:

::::::South Korea and the United Nations:

::::::- Lead includes the UNTCOK, Korean War & UN intervention, Observer status, Full membership, Major areas of UN engagement.

::::::- Divided the longer sentences and simplified them (eg. “South Korea (officially the Republic of Korea) has had a longstanding relationship with the United Nations since the end of World War II.” ---> “South Korea (officially the Republic of Korea) has engaged with the United Nations since the end of World War II.

::::::- Specified the context of the image caption.

::::::- Deleted Wikipedia as source and included four independent news on the Engagement section. For the scholarly papers I included reference 5, 13 and 14.

::::::North Korea and the United Nations:

::::::- Lead mentions the historical stance of DPRK on the UN, UN’s sanctions measures, and the current state of relations (limited cooperation, ongoing tensions).

::::::- Changed “Among 2006 and 2017” to “Between 2006 and 2017, the Security Council adopted multiple resolutions...”

::::::- Deleted Wikipedia citation and put more information on the citation I did manually.

::::::I had some issues cutting the long sentences since the translating tools I was using didn't help so I used AI to help me. Also, from reference 15 to 19 in the NK article I added as much information as I could find in the documents, please tell me if it's enough to meet the Wikipedia guideliness.

::::::Please let me know if this version is ready to publish. Thank you! Fatimald (talk) 13:07, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:::::::@Fatimald Good. Once you have ensured that you fixed all issues I mentioned above, you can publish your changes in the mainspace; then we will see what the reviewers think. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:12, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@ZixuanHE Please review the message you got at User talk:ZixuanHE - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia and improve your weekly edit activities to address the problem raised.

:As for your translations, the are progresing well.

:Before publishing them, please review the following:

:* Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:* When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

:* After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).

:* Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:* You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:* When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:* When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:07, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

::Professor, when you said that you need to add text to the article discussion page before publishing, do you mean add it to the front of the translated article page? ZixuanHE (talk) 10:22, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

:::@ZixuanHE I am afraid I do not understand your question. Can you quote the part of my instruction above that you would like to see clarified? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:47, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure

Here is the sandbox [https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Caizzz/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 link] for my first sandbox (Climate change in North Korea)

Here is the sandbox [https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3ACaizzz%2F%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%922&wvprov=sticky-header link] for my second sandbox (Minorities in North Korea)

Please check, thank you. Caizzz (talk) 08:55, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

:@Caizzz Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

:Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:Double check your blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

:When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

:After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:49, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure

This is the first [https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZHONGrich/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 link] of my sandbox

This is the second [https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZHONGrich/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%922 link] of my sandbox

Please check, thank you. ZHONGrich (talk) 12:32, 28 April 2025 (UTC)

:@ZHONGrich Very good. There is a red link error at the top of :zh:User:ZHONGrich/沙盒2 that you should fix.

:Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:Complete the translation by adding remaining content and references, as well as pictures.

:When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

:After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add similar one to your article).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:52, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Tby0204 Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

:The link to Wusha in your lead needs to be disambiguated.

:Comment section should be renamed to "Notes". See MOS:NOTES.

:Remove improper bolding from headings. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting. Remove redundant or malformed markup (e.g., broken references, stray periods). Some formatting artifacts remain in the text body (e.g., “the seventh lunar monthref name.”).

:You need to translate references. Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). Please make sure your references that are not originally in English (Korean, Chinese, etc.) have both the original title (under title parameter) and translated one (English, under translated title parameter). That also implies to works mentioned in text, like "In his 1934 book "Taiwan's Old Customs of Weddings, Funerals and Festivals During the Year", Suzuki Seiichiro". If this book is in Chinese, provide its Chinese title. (Or is it Japanese?).

:Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. I fixed some for you, but check if there are any others. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:Please double check your translation. A Chinese speaker I consulted pointed to literal translation errors or awkwardness in many places lead to errors like misleading meanings (e.g., "Grasping Orphan activity" for 搶孤) - it should probably be “Orphan Snatching Festival” or just “Qianggu Festival”. Inconsistent or confusing terminology appears (e.g., “fictive name” for “pseudonym”, or . "Paper-made figures" instead of “paper effigies”). There are also redundant and grammatically broken sentences like at the very begining, "The Toucheng Kaicheng Temple Chenghuang Temple, It is a Guanyin Temple and City God Temple...". "isCity God of Anxi，See the revolving lantern display of temple photos." doesn't make sense. Why is the word structure capitalized in the heading "Organizational Structure"? “Main meeting, main altar, main Jiaoju” this should be explained or translated into standard English equivalents. What is Jiaoju? What is Qianggu? Such concepts need to be linked or explained. “Dou Shou” (斗首) is never explained (you should link it or add explanation in a comment like “The ‘Dou Shou’ were community leaders responsible for organizing ritual tasks during the festival.”)

:You can use new tools like advanced AI platforms to receive personalized feedback on the quality of your translation and its adherence to Wikipedia policies. Come to my office if you'd like a demonstration _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:12, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure 1:00 p.m.

This is the first link of my sandbox

This is the second link of my sandbox

Please check, thank you. 2024005832 YeonWoo Jung (talk) 07:47, 29 April 2025 (UTC)

:@Oimaisazo I noticed that your work is in your English Wikipedia sandbox. If you are translating to Chinese, you need to move it to Chinese Wikipedia. Please use your Chinese Wikipedia sandbox and update me when your work is moved and ready for review in the correct platform. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:13, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

::I moved to Wikipedia in Korean because I was going to translate it into Korean. I'll leave a link again below.

::This is the first link of [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Oimaisazo/sandbox my sandbox] This is the second link of [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Oimaisazo/sandbox2 my sandbox]

::Please check, thank you. 2024005832 YeonWoo Jung (talk) 11:07, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

:::@Oimaisazo Ah, yes, Korean, not Chinese, you are correct.

:::Your work is now in the correct place.

:::Next, complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:::Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:::Ask me for another review once these steps are completed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:55, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

This is my sandbox and this is my article.I really need your assistance. I would be extremely grateful if I could get your help. Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 08:43, 29 April 2025 (UTC)

:@Zzzzzhouziyu I see. I will be happy to help.

:First, note that you can have multiple sandbox. Post your second translation in your second sandbox - it doesn't have to be in your first sandbox.

:Regarding your translation problems. I see you received reviews from Chinese Wikipedia reviewers. Did you attempt to talk to any of the reviewers, as they have themselves suggested you? I looked at your edits on Chinese Wikipedia at User contributions by Zzzzzhouziyu - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia and I do not see discussion posts made by you.

:One of the problems you are likely facing, as evidenced by the most recent comment from the reviewer, is that you have some content in your article that is unreferenced. As noted in the syllabus and the description of our project: "Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability)." You need to find references for the unreferenced section of your translation, or delete them.

:Wasn't this already explained to you by the reviewer SuperGrey in his comment on April 23, 2025? Was something unclear? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:22, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

::Dear Professor, I have revised my translation as per your request. I have ensured that each paragraph of my article has more than one citation and re-submitted it after checking these citations. However, the volunteers still believe that my translation does not meet the Wikipedia guidelines. I have also left messages on different discussion pages for them. The volunteers think that the English version of this article itself is not suitable for publication on Wikipedia because it is too subjective and of low quality. Therefore, my translation cannot be published on Wikipedia either. Maybe can I change to another article and then I'll retranslate it?My second article is already under review by the volunteers. This is my first article, and it has been unable to pass the review. I sincerely hope to receive your help. Thank you! Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 08:57, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

:::@Zzzzzhouziyu You can change the topic, yes, but you put a good amount of work into your current translation, and I think the fixes needed should not be major. Did you attempt to add references or remove the unreferenced parts? Can you point me to the place you have discussed this issue with the reviewers, particularly since my feedback and suggestions above? I will take a look. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:59, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

::::Dear Professor, following your advice, I have made extensive improvements to the article. Due to the scarcity of references on abortion in India, I was unable to find additional sources. However, I have carefully reviewed all the existing references, checked them and removed the unsuitable ones, ensuring that each paragraph of my article now has appropriate references. As for the volunteers, I left my questions on their discussion page, but no one replied. Moreover, they prohibited me from resubmitting the article, stating that it did not meet Wikipedia's inclusion standards. They informed me that if I wanted to contribute to the topic of abortion in India, I would need to rewrite the article completely. This is Discuss This is my first article,this is my sandbox,and my second one is currently under review. I think I might really need to choose a different article to complete your assignment. So, could you please recommend a third article for me to translate? Thank you very much! Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 14:28, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

::::I truly believe that I have done my utmost to make this article conform to the standards of Wikipedia. But it still didn't pass the review. Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 14:32, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

:::::@Zzzzzhouziyu I see. In this case, how about translating this article - Bosnian genocide denial? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:33, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

::::::Dear Professor, I'm very sorry to trouble you again. Could I change to another article? Because this one shows Parsoid error many times when published.This article seems unable to be published. Zzzzzhouziyu (talk) 14:41, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

:::::::@Zzzzzhouziyu This seems like a technical error we can fix in my office; stop by it on M or F and we will see about it, or choose another topic if all else fails. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:37, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@A1246632822 Good progress.

:Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

:After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:24, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed the translation of four articles in Sandbox.

This is the first link of my sandbox“Sustainable agriculture”

This is the second link of my sandbox“Censorship by Facebook”

This is the third link of my sandbox"Censorship by TikTok"

This is the fourth link of my sandbox"History of macroeconomic thought"

Please check , thank you.

A15928872517 (talk) 13:43, 29 April 2025 (UTC)

:@A15928872517

:Good progress.

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

:: After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:25, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

Hello professor. I'm taking the morning class of Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure. I've completed my Week 9 task. It is my first article and second article, and I have translated English into Korean. Here's my first sandbox link and [https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Nowey22/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A52&action=edit second link]. Let me know if there's anything else I need to modify or do more. Thank you. Nowey22 (talk) 15:40, 29 April 2025 (UTC)

:@Nowey22 Very good. Next:

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크 . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

:: After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (since it is in Korean)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:27, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

I am a student who takes every day life and social structure morning classes. These are links to the sandbox translated into Korean: [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:2024099889%EC%8B%AC%ED%98%84%EC%A7%80/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 sandbox1], [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AF%B8%EB%94%94%EC%96%B4_%EC%86%8D_%EC%9E%A5%EB%82%9C sandbox2]

Please check. Thank you.

*English article: article1, article2 2024099889심현지 (talk) 03:22, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

:@2024099889심현지 Good, but you need to fix your hyperlinks.

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크 . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

:: After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (since it is in Korean)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:30, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

::I have finished editing the blue links and added both the ko:틀:과제 문서 and ko:틀:번역된_문서 templates to the talk pages. I would appreciate it if you could check whether the sandbox articles are now ready to be published to the mainspace.

::+ Also, I would be grateful if you could review the message that was sent to my email (hyunji0907@) regarding Project 2.

::Thank you. 2024099889심현지 (talk) 06:00, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

:::@2024099889심현지 Very good, you can now publish your work following my guide above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:34, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

:@XIXIANGRUI I see the reviewers have raised some issues concerning one of your articles. Please read their comments carefully and work with them to address them.

:Regarding your first article, here's a checklist of things to do:

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

:: After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:32, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

::Ok professor XIXIANGRUI (talk) 01:34, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

Atlanta Falcons -> 애틀랜타 팰컨스

Graham Potter -> 그레이엄 포터

Thank you

Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 06:18, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Kim jong min (hanyang) Very good.

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크 . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (since it is in Korean)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:29, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking classes 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.

I have completed the task for that parking.

- [https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Xisuux/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5/%EA%B5%AD%EC%A0%9C%EC%9D%B8%EA%B6%8C%EB%B2%95&action=edit 국제인권법]

- 속임수

- 해커문화

- 브로니스와프 카스페르

Thank you.

Xisuux (talk) 06:44, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Xisuux Good, but you need to fix your hyperlinks. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia.. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크 . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:When your translation is finished you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this.

:After publishing your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (since it is in Korean) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:28, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

I take a collective intelligence in practice class.

I've finished both the first article and second article.

Please check and let me know if there is anything that needs to be modified.

thank you. Khji0620 (talk) 12:19, 1 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Khji0620 Very good. Here are the next steps:

:Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

:When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:00, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

::I've finished all the work on the Cannabis in Australia article. But when I first chose Interstellar travel, there was no Korean translation, but when I tried to add it, the translation existed. What do I do in this case? Khji0620 (talk) 13:31, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

:::@Khji0620 Indeed, it does appear that an unrelated volunteer translated that article just a week or so before you begun your work (compare the dates: [https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%84%B1%EA%B0%84_%EC%9D%B4%EB%8F%99&action=history 성간 이동: Revision history - 위키백과] ; [https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Khji0620/Sandbox2&action=history 사용자:Khji0620/Sandbox2: Revision history - 위키백과]). It is always a good practice to check on the status of the article before starting. I will recognize your effort for extra credit, and you can work on a shorter article for your project. How about List of artificial objects leaving the Solar System? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:03, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

::::I have completed a new article. Please check and let me know if there is anything that needs to be modified. Khji0620 (talk) 15:46, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

:::::@Khji0620 Very well done, good job. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:38, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I have finished translating these articles.

For Everyday Life and Social Structure:

German atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II to Korean version

Soviet atrocities committed against prisoners of war during World War II to Korean version

For Collective Intelligence in Practice:

I previously chose Online hate speech and American Sociological Association, but there were already Korean versions.

So I worked on these two articles related to this class but not yet translated into Korean.

Propaganda through media to Korean version

Mass media and American politics to Korean version

I reflected the change in our spreadsheet and my dashboard.

All my Korean articles are complete and ready to be published. Am I allowed to move these to the mainspace?

Please check. Thank you.

Yeonseo Koo (talk) 01:42, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Yeonseo Koo Excellent. You can move them. Here are the next steps:

:When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page: :ko:틀:번역된_문서 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:03, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

I am a student who takes every day life and social structure morning classes. These are links to the sandbox translated into Korean: [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Jungyuna/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 sandbox1], [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Jungyuna/%EC%83%8C%EB%93%9C%EB%B0%95%EC%8A%A4 sandbox2]

Please check. Thank you. Jungyuna (talk) 02:14, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Jungyuna Good. For your next steps:

:Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:Then ask me for another review. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:04, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

I am a student who takes every day life and social structure morning classes.

These are links to the sandbox translated into Chinese.

Please check. Thank you. Peter011008 (talk) 02:19, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Peter011008 Very good. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

:Ask me for another review once you complete the translation and double check the issues above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:06, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

::Some English articles do not have Chinese producers yet,

::I used a cross-language linking solution, checked for omissions, and added pictures.

::Here is link

::Hope your give me guidance.

::Thank you Peter011008 (talk) 02:52, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand （13:00-14:30）Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time (14:30-16:00）.

I have completed the translation of two articles. Please check, thank you.[https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ttkx11/亚洲皇家学会韩国分会] [https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ttkx11/沙盒-资源调动] Ttkx11 (talk) 04:20, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Ttkx11 Good progress.

:Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:Can you add some pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

:When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :zh:Template:Translated page. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:07, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

I am studying Everyday Life and Social Structure and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence

Here is the sandbox [https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Minazhuang777/东南日报&action=edit link] for my first sandbox （The Southeast Daily）

Here is the sandbox link for my second sandbox (Historiography of Korea)

Please check, thank you.

My Southeast Daily article seems to be in the wrong sandbox. Can you tell me how to move it to the English sandbox？Thank you. Minazhuang777 (talk) 04:29, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Minazhuang777 To move your sandbox, copy all content from one sandbox to another. When moving it from one language to another, you may have to fix errors in links, references and other advanced elements - this is why you should always work in the correct project (Wikipedia/language) from the beginning. Stop by my office if you need help, otherwise ping me here when your work is in the correct language project, and I'll review it again. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:12, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

I am currently taking both Everyday Life and Social Structure (Class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I have completed the translations of the respective documents.

Everyday Life and Social Structure

Censorship by copyright : EN / KR

Web novels in South Korea : EN / KR

Collective Intelligence in Practice

book consorship in United States : EN / KR

censorship by Apple : EN / KR

I have completed all the work on the respective documents, and I plan to transfer them once I receive confirmation from you that there are no issues.

Please review them at your convenience. Thank you.

Ljhwa (talk) 04:48, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Ljhwa Very good. Can you add some more pictures to the article? Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

:After that, when your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :ko:틀:번역된_문서. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:09, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

::Dear Professor,

::I have accepted the feedback and added images to the document.

::However, the article titled Korean Web Novels includes a novel cover image, which has not been uploaded to Wikimedia Commons and is a commercial image; therefore, it cannot be uploaded to the Korean Wikipedia.

::As a result, I updated the document by excluding that image and worked only with the remaining ones. Once it is confirmed that there are no issues with this part of the work, I will proceed with categorization and other tasks.

::Please review it at your convenience. Thank you.

::Ljhwa (talk) 14:24, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:::@Ljhwa You are correct that image cannot be used. Good job; let me know when you publish your work or if you have any questions and need help _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:05, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

I am currently studying Everyday life and Social structure. I have completed the English-to-Chinese translation.

This is the first link of my sandbox This is the second link of my sandbox

Please check, thank you. Ryuthefang (talk) 04:55, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Ryuthefang Very good!

:When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :zh:Template:Translated page. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:10, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

I am currently studying Everyday life and Social structure. I have completed the English-to-Chinese translation.

This is the second link of my article.

Please check, thank you. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 05:10, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:See feedback below. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:09, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

I would like to confirm the details of my observation project for the physical environment and behavior study. I have chosen to observe a public space in the subway.

Location: Line 4 subway, from the 한대앞 to 사당 Station

Time: Daily at 5:00 PM (after school)

Duration: Approximately 40 minutes per session

Method: Observations will be recorded in a structured table format

Focus:

How passengers choose seats

How do they pass the time on the subway

How they manage physical distance between strangers and acquaintances

Please let me know if this project is acceptable or if any changes are needed.

Best regards, Zjy402 (talk) 05:18, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Zjy402 That's ok - good luck! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:09, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Chensiyu2004 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:09, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

I have completed the translation of two articles. During the translation process, I noticed that the Chinese Wikipedia lacks some relevant content. Since I am very interested in science fiction, I hope to try to translate an English article into Chinese. On the one hand, I can practice my translation skills, and on the other hand, I hope to contribute to enriching the content of the Chinese page. If you can give me guidance or feedback, I will be very grateful. I look forward to your reply and thank you for your time! WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 05:30, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@WUXIAOTONG Bancy I am glad to hear it. In fact, I am also very interested in science fiction, and I work with many volunteers here to improve this topic area. Time travel in fiction is an important topic, but it is not a very good article right now (it's not bad, but it's not good - which is why it is assessed on talk as a C-class). You can translate it - but it will need to be fixed and improved eventually, as the original English article will need to be revised.

:In related context, just few weeks ago we created a better (if pretty short) entry on Time machine, which seems to be missing from zh wiki and would be a good and easy topic to translate.

:For another short article, here are few things I wrote up recently: Artificial planet and Inner space (science fiction)

:You can find lists of very good sf-related articles to potentially translate at [https://wp1.openzim.org/#/project/Science_fiction/articles?quality=FA-Class Wikipedia 1.0 Server - Science_fiction FA articles] and [https://wp1.openzim.org/#/project/Science_fiction/articles?quality=GA-Class Wikipedia 1.0 Server - Science_fiction GA articles] .

:Feel free to stop by my office if you'd like to chat more about improving SF content on Wikipedia. Live long and prosper :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:21, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

::Oh, I forgot about this article I wrote a while back that you may find very interesting and that could use translation as well: Space travel in science fiction _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:28, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

:::Thank you for the professor's reply. I will try to translate the article on Artificial planet given by the professor. Thank you, professor. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 02:57, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

::::@WUXIAOTONG Bancy Ok! Check the Polish version of the article for some additional images you can use _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:34, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

This is the second [https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chensiyu2004/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92Street_food_of_Thailand link].

Check it for me, thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 05:49, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Chensiyu2004

:: Very good!

:: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :zh:Template:Translated page

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:27, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

[https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:2024096508_Kim_Seoyoung/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5] [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:2024096508_Kim_Seoyoung/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A52] 2024096508 Kim Seoyoung (talk) 05:55, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@2024096508 Kim Seoyoung Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

:Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:32, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

::Hello, professor, I received your feedback well. I added 'frame: task document' and 'frame: translated document' to match the feedback. Please check. And I didn't use the frame: temporary link, but I wonder if I should use the blue link as well. I know you are busy, but please check it. Thank you.

::[https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:2024096508_Kim_Seoyoung/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5] [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:2024096508_Kim_Seoyoung/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A52] 2024096508 Kim Seoyoung (talk) 05:10, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

:::@2024096508 Kim Seoyoung Very good, but the templates should be placed on article's talk page, not in the text. After fixing this, you can publish your work following my guide above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:37, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Corruption in Japan

Inglehart–Welzel cultural map of the world

Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 06:49, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Jo HyeonSeong

:: Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:32, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I've mostly finished the two main articles for the course — Maxim's Bakery and Cognitive warfare — both translated from Chinese to English.

I also worked on five articles for extra credit: Wu Shun Tak, Maxim's MX, Maxim's Bakery, Traditional Chinese sausages, and Stir-fried glutinous rice. You can see all my edits here.

Feel free to take a look whenever you have time！

Thanks! Uuueol (talk) 07:25, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Uuueol Very good. Here are my comments:

:* When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page. If your article is in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page. When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English), or :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

:Regarding Maxim's Bakery - the zh article has images - can you add them to the English translation? Also

:* it would be good to add Template:Infobox company to it. Ask me for help in my office or in class if you have trouble with that

:* Expand the lead to briefly mention its founding year, parent company (Maxim’s Caterers), notable distribution model (e.g., MTR presence), and any milestones. A 2–3 sentence paragraph is expected per Wikipedia:Lead_section.

:* Avoid "Currently" in “Currently, there are 148 outlets…” — Wikipedia avoids time-sensitive language. Use "As of [year]" or provide a specific date. What is current today may not be tommorrow

:* Use either “Maxim’s Cakes” or “Maxim’s Bakery” consistently. Consult official materials from the company or English source coverage to check which one is better. Double check your capitalization is consistent.

:* Consider separating incident reporting into a more standard titled section (e.g., ==Controversies== or ==Notable incidents== rather than just ==Incident==).

:* Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:* Add navigation aids, such as ==See also== with internal links (already done nicely in the Chinese version).

:One of your articles was merged to another by another volunteer. You may want to discuss this at Talk:Chinese sticky rice - Wikipedia

:Regarding Wu Shun Tak - the lead is too short. It should explain why Wu Shun Tak is notable. Mention: his role as co-founder of Maxim’s, his business impact, and his educational philanthropy. Read and follow WP:LEAD (Manual of Style/Lead section).

:Don't list relatives unless sourced and relevant. Encyclopedias are not genealogies.

:Some phrases are too honorific or subjective for Wikipedia: “Renowned industrialist” → better as “Chinese industrialist” “A respected and honorable legacy” (from a source) should not be echoed in Wikipedia’s voice. Replace phrases like “devoted to public welfare” with factual content, e.g., “He donated to Tsinghua University and founded a school in Taishan.” Follow WP:NPOV (Neutral Point of View) and WP:TONE for encyclopedic writing.

:In Memorials section, citations should not be in the heading, but at the end of each bullet point or paragraph (if relevant to it).

:For Maxim's MX - add images. That translation includes many paragraphs marked with {{FACT}} tags in the Chinese original. These indicate unsourced or unverifiable claims. On English Wikipedia, such material should be removed per WP:V unless a reliable source can be found. Examples include the “御膳” project, the microwave meals in 7-11 and Wellcome, and rebranding efforts from 2015 or 2022. Suggested fix: remove these paragraphs entirely or mark them clearly for future citation (e.g., in your sandbox) if you plan to add sources later.

:The current translation uses some non-neutral language such as “brought a refreshing dining experience” or “remarkable success.” This violates WP:NPOV (Neutral Point of View). Suggested fix: rewrite with factual and neutral phrasing, e.g., “introduced Japanese set meals alongside Chinese and Western dishes” or “following positive customer response.”

:As for Traditional Chinese sausages: The translated article omits the entire "Health concerns" and "International variants" sections, both of which are present in the Chinese version. While most of the article is factual, some parts lean slightly into promotional or subjective phrasing. For example: "giving it a distinctive aroma and taste" would better phrased as: "infusing the rice with the sausage’s characteristic flavor." The lead could be expanded with a short sentence on regional variants or international recognition (e.g., its use in Southeast Asian Chinese diasporas). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:00, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

::Thank you for the feedback! I’ve gone through all the points you mentioned and made the necessary changes. For the parts in the Chinese version that were marked with [citation needed], I left them out of the English article since I couldn’t find reliable sources, following Wikipedia’s verifiability policy.

::I’ve also made sure to use “Maxim’s Cakes” consistently throughout the article, based on the company’s official materials. Since I can’t move the article myself, I’ve posted a message on the talk page to ask an admin for help with renaming it. Uuueol (talk) 08:52, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

::About one of my additional articles — it was merged into Chinese sticky rice by another editor. I’m fine with the merge and my content is still part of the article. Just wanted to check if this can still count toward my extra article. Uuueol (talk) 09:14, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:::@Uuueol Regarding moving Maxim's Cakes, please follow the procedure for requesting a move as outlined at Wikipedia:Requested moves.

:::Regarding the merged content, yes, it counts for your credit. You may want to join the discussion at the talk page of talk:Chinese_sticky_rice#Merge_from_Stir-fried_glutinous_rice and tell us whether these two dishes are the same or not. If they are the same, you can get extra points for proposing a merge on zh wiki by following procedures at https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:%E5%90%88%E5%B9%B6%E9%A1%B5%E9%9D%A2 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:17, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

2.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JINJINYAN/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92_%E6%88%91%E4%BB%AC%E6%9C%AC%E6%80%A7%E4%B8%AD%E7%9A%84%E5%96%84%E8%89%AF%E5%A4%A9%E4%BD%BF JINJINYAN (talk) 09:10, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@JINJINYAN

:: Very good!

:: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :zh:Template:Translated page

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:04, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

This is Kim Myeongjun, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). I have finished translating two topics I chosen, I have attached the first link and the second link to it here, please check it out. Myeong220 (talk) 11:59, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Myeong220

:: Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:05, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

Please check my sandbox . Thank you. Naheekim2025 (talk) 13:31, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Naheekim2025

:: If you are translating content to Korean Wikipedia, you should be using a sandbox on Korean Wikipedia, not English Wikipedia. Please move your content to Korean Wikipedia and see what formatting issues need to be fixed.

:: Ask me again for a review once your content is on Korean Wikipedia.

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:06, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B).

Here is the articles I finished tranlsating: my sandbox for income equality metrics // my sandbox for Opera in South Korea

Please review these articles. Thank you. Leorhee04 (talk) 14:09, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Leorhee04

:: Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:07, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Chensiwen

:: Very good!

:: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :zh:Template:Translated page

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:08, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Jzhdylb It's ok to change topics - you can stop by office and we can discuss it

:As for the number of topics, for a solo project, it's usually two articles in Chinese (or Korean), or one in English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:14, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

::OK professor, I would like to come to your office after class on Friday to discuss changing the subject, thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 04:26, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

:::@Jzhdylb Sure _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:38, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week9 . Please check here.Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 09:54, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

:@A15928872517 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:14, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

These are links to my sandbox translated into Korean:[https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Youn1002/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 sandbox1] [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Youn1002/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A52 sandbox2]

Please let me know if there is a problem. Thank you.

Youn1002 (talk) 12:35, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Youn1002 Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

:Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:16, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

::Hello professor.I added the citation to remaining content and remaining paragraphs.Please check my sandbox again.Thank you. Youn1002 (talk) 02:53, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:::@Youn1002 That's progress but you are far from complete. Comparing https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Youn1002/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 to Middle class shows that you still need to translate much, much more. For example, your draft has 6 references; the English original, over 60. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:38, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Here is the articles I finished tranlsating: sandbox

Please review these articles. Thank you. Hane a nice day. JUNG YOUBIN (talk) 15:47, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

:@JUNG YOUBIN

:: Very good. You are almost ready to publish your work. Few things to double check now and after publication:

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:16, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

My name is Yerim Kim 2024009943 and I am taking the afternoon class Understanding Daily Life and Social Structure. I have completed the translation of three articles (Cannabis and religion, Cannabis in Hong Kong, and Cannabis in North Korea). I have added footnotes to words for which Korean Wikipedia exists. I have also found sources and added citations to sentences that need sources. Please check them.

Yrmisoee (talk) 16:03, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Yrmisoee

:: Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:17, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I want to briefly report on my translation progress. So far, I have translated four articles.

These four translation projects ([https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%B8%BD%E5%AD%90&action=history link1], [https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E7%BD%91%E7%BB%9C%E8%B4%AD%E7%89%A9&action=history link2], link3, [https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%86%B0%E6%B7%87%E6%B7%8B&action=history link4]) have already been moved to public pages, and I confirmed with you in Week 5 that there were no problems with them.

In addition, I have completed five additional translations for extra points.（[https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E8%82%8C%E8%82%89%E8%A8%98%E6%86%B6&action=history link1] [https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E8%9B%87%E7%BE%B9&action=history link2] [https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E6%AF%8F%E6%97%A5%E7%94%B5%E8%AE%AF%E6%8A%A5&action=history link3] [https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E8%96%84%E8%8D%B7%E7%B3%96&action=history link4] [https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%88%A9%E5%8F%A3%E6%A8%82&action=history link5]）

Thank you. Have a nice day! Cuicuizan (talk) 17:41, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Cuicuizan Excellent job! Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:18, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

I am currently studying Everyday life and Social structure. I have completed the English-to-Chinese translation.

This is the link of my article.

Please check, thank you. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 19:05, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

:@WUXIAOTONG Bancy Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

:Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

:Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

:When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:08, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

::Dear professor, hello. According to your suggestions, I have made comprehensive revisions to the second article. At present, the article has been improved and stored in my user page. However, due to permission restrictions, I cannot move it from the user page to the main namespace, and thus cannot add cross-language links. Therefore, I sincerely request your assistance in moving the page to the main space so that the entry can be officially published. Your help will play a vital role in further improving and optimizing the content of the article. Thank you again for your guidance and support! Here is the link to my revised article. WUXIAOTONG Bancy (talk) 13:29, 13 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Hanyangdaxue

:: Very good!

:: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :zh:Template:Translated page

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:19, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

article 1 article 2

Thank you professor, have a nice weekend. Koolujman (talk) 04:27, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Koolujman Good. Please check the history of your articles to see how experienced volunteers fixed some issues: [https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Music_(%ED%94%8C%EB%A0%88%EC%9D%B4%EB%B3%B4%EC%9D%B4_%EC%B9%B4%ED%8B%B0%EC%9D%98_%EC%9D%8C%EB%B0%98)&action=history Music (플레이보이 카티의 음반): Revision history - 위키백과] , [https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EB%A7%88%EC%9D%B4%ED%81%AC_%EB%94%98&action=history 마이크 딘: Revision history - 위키백과] . Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page. When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:21, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

:@XXUXINRAN

:: Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

:: Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:: Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

:: Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:22, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

::Professor, I have added the quoted content as per your request. Please check if it can be moved now. My sandbox XXUXINRAN (talk) 13:08, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:::@XXUXINRAN Almost. You should use a proper infobox instead of a simple table, at the top: try this tool: https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Template:Infobox_book _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:39, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Social Structure of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence with Zhong Qi.

Here is the article we have completed translating:

https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%A5%B3%E6%80%A7%E4%B8%BB%E7%BE%A9%E6%AD%B7%E5%8F%B2

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/China_Movie_Channel

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lei_Feng

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yeomll

Please review these articles. Thank you.

––Yeomll (talk) 13:17, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Yeomll Good job!

:Regarding your link 1 (translation to zh), please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:Regarding your link 4 (User:Yeomll - Wikipedia) shouldn't this be at zh wiki? It's in Chinese.

:Regarding your two English projects, not that at Lei Feng some content was removed as it was unreferenced. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability)..

:Avoid mid-sentence Chinese conjunctions like "和" being translated as "and" without proper integration. Example: “...by the Chinese Communist Party和Government of China” should become “...by both the Chinese Communist Party and the government of China.”

:Consider using tools like Grammarly or ChatGPT to correct prose and vocabulary to be more fluent and natural English, while reflecting Wikipedia's encyclopedic style and Manual of Style.

:Regarding the TV article: Per WP:LEAD, the lead should summarize the entire article in 2–4 paragraphs. Currently, the lead is one paragraph, and fails to clarify what CCTV-6 is as a channel (not just its legal host institution), mention its dual nature (as both a government channel and entertainment broadcaster) or describe scope: reach, major programs, affiliations (e.g., CHC channels). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:36, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

::The introduction has been modified according to Wikipedia's requirements. Please check.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/China_Movie_Channel Kylo09 (talk) 10:27, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:::@Kylo09 Good, it is much better. Now, how about other issues I've noted? Did you fix them too? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:41, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I take a collective intelligence in practice class.

I've finished both the [https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%3AYhnahc%2Fsandbox&oldid=prev&diff=39647039 first article] and [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Yhnahc second article].

Please check and let me know if there is anything that needs to be modified. Yhnahc (talk) 13:18, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Yhnahc Your first translation is very rough, with no code translated (where are the hyperlinks, references, etc.?). Your second translation has more code, but there are plenty of errors (such as - why are there two reference sections in the article?). Clean this up and ask me for feedback when you have translated all the content, and fixed obvious omissions and errors like the ones above.

:Regarding blue links (hyperlinks): make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:39, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.

I have completed the translation of four English articles into Chinese. Please check it here~[https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pineappleq/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92/%E5%8D%B3%E5%B0%86%E5%88%B0%E6%9D%A5%E7%9A%84%E4%B8%8E%E6%97%A5%E6%9C%AC%E7%9A%84%E6%88%98%E4%BA%89 article.1] [https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pineappleq/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%922_%E9%9F%A9%E5%9B%BD%E7%9A%84%E7%BD%91%E7%BB%9C%E5%B0%8F%E8%AF%B4 article.2] [https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pineappleq/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92_3/%E5%BC%97%E6%B4%9B%E9%87%8C%E5%AE%89%C2%B7%E5%85%B9%E7%BA%B3%E6%B6%85%E8%8C%A8%E5%9F%BA article.3] [https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pineappleq/%E4%B8%89%E7%A7%8D%E6%88%98%E4%BA%89 article.4]

I also have finished my weekly wiki editing for week9 total more than 10edits. Please check [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:Contributions/Pineappleq here].

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 13:23, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Pineappleq

:: Very good!

:: When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :zh:Template:Translated page

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:39, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

This is Sihoon Lee, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B).

I've finished translating both articles, [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/2024_%EC%A4%91%EC%95%99_%EC%9C%A0%EB%9F%BD_%ED%99%8D%EC%88%98 One] was moved page for everyone to see based on the feedback you gave me in week5. The [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Skymir1127/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A51 other one] is in my sandbox with the status of translated.

Best Regards, Sihoon Lee Skymir1127 (talk) 14:41, 4 May 2025 (UTC) Skymir1127 (talk) 14:39, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Skymir1127 Very good. You can now publish your second article, following the same procedure as before.

:Also, review the history of your first article at [https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=2024_%EC%A4%91%EC%95%99_%EC%9C%A0%EB%9F%BD_%ED%99%8D%EC%88%98&action=history 2024 중앙 유럽 홍수: Revision history - 위키백과] to see how experienced Korean volunteers fixed some minor errors in it, and try to fix them in your second article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:41, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

I've finished translating both articles. These are links to my article: my sandbox 1 and my sandbox 2

Please check. Thank you! 짠 튀 응아 (talk) 15:17, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

:@짠 튀 응아

:: Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크 On Vietnamese, Bản mẫu:interlanguage link – Wikipedia tiếng Việt. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page. (There is no Vietnamese equivalent AFAIT)

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean). On Vietnamese, use [https://vi.wikipedia.org/wiki/B%E1%BA%A3n_m%E1%BA%ABu:B%C3%A0i_d%E1%BB%8Bch]

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:43, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

I am Zhang Zehua, a student in the morning class of Sociology of Everyday Life.

My Chinese translation has been completed, please check it [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZHANG0822ZH/朝鲜战争中的苏联]. Thank you ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 16:16, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

:@ZHANG0822ZH

:: Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next stepss.

:: Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:: Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

:: Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:45, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

This is Hyunseo Nam, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). I've been completed translating. Here is my link https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/사용자:Hyunseo050907/연습장 Hyunseo050907 (talk) 16:55, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Hyunseo050907 Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

:Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead. Please ask me for a review before that stage. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:47, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

:Hello, I read your translated article and found it overall natural and easy to read. I’d like to offer a couple of suggestions: some paragraphs are missing references, so it would be great if you could add those. Also, a few blue links don’t seem to lead to Korean Wikipedia articles—please double-check them. Keep up the good work! Kimkiwoong (talk) 01:04, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

::@Kimkiwoong I assume you tried leaving a feedback for a fellow student, but this is not the right place for it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:41, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I've finished translating both articles. These are links to my article: sandbox1 and sandbox2

Please check. Thank you! NGUYENKIMCHI12 (talk) 09:59, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

:@NGUYENKIMCHI12

:: Very good. Few things to double check now and after publication:

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크 On Vietnamese, Bản mẫu:interlanguage link – Wikipedia tiếng Việt. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page. (There is no Vietnamese equivalent AFAIT)

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean). On Vietnamese, use [14]

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 14:47, 5 May 2025 (UTC)

1. **"Anti-Japanese sentiment in the United States"** → [미국 내 반일 감정](https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/미국_내_반일_감정)

2. **"The Coming War with Japan"** → [다가오는 일본과의 전쟁](https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/다가오는_일본과의_전쟁)

The original English versions I translated from are:

- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anti-Japanese_sentiment_in_the_United_States

- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=The_Coming_War_with_Japan&oldid=1268946625

I would appreciate your feedback on these articles.

Thank you very much! 김선길 (talk) 04:48, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

:@김선길 Very good, but please follow the following steps to finish your project:

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :ko:틀:번역된_문서

:: In your second article, please fix the reference errors reported at the bottom (or stop by my office and we will take a look at them together).

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:40, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

::Hello Professor,

:: Thank you for your previous feedback. I have carefully followed your instructions and completed all the necessary steps:

::I added appropriate categories to both of my articles based on the original English versions.

::I included the {{과제 문서}} template on the talk pages of the Korean articles.

::I also added the {{번역된 문서}} template to indicate that these are translated works, in accordance with WP:TFOLWP.

::For the second article (The Coming War with Japan), I reviewed and fixed the reference errors that were appearing at the bottom.

::Please let me know if there is anything else I should address. Thank you again for your guidance! 김선길 (talk) 15:10, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:::@김선길 Good; please monitor your articles to make sure they are not rejected by the reviewers. Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:42, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Mcx8202229 Good progress. Here are things to fix:

:* review WP:LEAD and consider how you need to change your lead section to meet Wikipedia guidelines (you can ask AI for advice as well, regarding this issue and others)

:* when citing books, please provide page range used and relevant quotations from the cited pages

:* Some expressions are too casual, folkloric, or culturally internal. For example: "A happy life is hard-won. Go forward and you will have a bright future." Is this a proverb? It does not make much sense in the article. Perhaps you meant something like "The sweet taste is traditionally interpreted as symbolizing the rewards of hard work.”?

:* “It must be savored well” → avoid metaphorical advice; stick to description and cultural interpretations.

:* The legend about the apprentice and master must be introduced clearly as folklore or oral tradition, e.g.: “According to Bai oral tradition…” And it must be attributed to a reliable or published source—not just "there is a legend…".

:* Phrases like “Bai ethnic group’s three-course tea, also known as three-course tea” are redundant.

:* Please read WP:NOTGUIDE. The article comes close to being a “how-to” guide (e.g., “add cinnamon, pour hot tea…”). Summarize these processes concisely without making it instructional.

:* Mention whether similar multi-course tea traditions exist in other regions of China or in other ethnic groups, if sources allow.

:*Many statements are presented as general facts without attribution: “It is said that...” → Who says this? “It is generally believed...” → According to whom?

:*“There is an old saying that goes ‘A first course of tea is for courtesy, a second for taste, and a third for reflection.’” → This quote is likely folk wisdom and needs proper sourcing or framing as a saying.

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:49, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

I have completed the editing task of the Wikipedia article.

Please check it. Thank you. Liuminghan (talk) 17:25, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Liuminghan Very good. You can publish your article shortly, following my checklist below:

:Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link.

:After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:01, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

I have completed the editing task of the Wikipedia article.

Please check it. Thank you. 이청로 (talk) 19:17, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

:@이청로

:: Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps.

:: Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:: Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

:: Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:02, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

I am Zhang Zehua, a student in the morning class of Sociology of Everyday Life.

I added the main means by which the Soviet Union manipulated information during the war and its impact on the Soviet Union. Because the English article recently deleted the war process, I also deleted it. Please check it, thank you！ ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 02:43, 7 May 2025 (UTC)

:@ZHANG0822ZH I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in English Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to Chinese or Korean, you need to move it to Chinese Wikipedia or Korean Wikipedia, respectively. Please use your Chinese Wikipedia sandbox and update me when your work is moved and ready for review on the correct platform. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:03, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

Also, regarding my major assignment, I have read your suggestions in detail and will make detailed changes, but it will take some time. Bai0926 (talk) 08:49, 7 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Bai0926 Ok - keep up the good work! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:04, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

:@김규리05

:: Very good. You are almost ready to publish them. Few things to double check now and after publication:

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Korean, please add :ko:틀:과제 문서 to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :ko:틀:번역된_문서 (if it is in Korean)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:05, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

I’m writing to confirm my Project 2 topic.  Although this assignment was originally described as group work, I’ve been working on it individually.  I hope this is acceptable.

In class, I briefly mentioned that I was planning to observe behavior in the campus café, and I’d now like to formally confirm that as my topic.  Specifically, I’m focusing on how students choose their seats at different times of day.  I’ve been observing patterns related to location (e.g., window seats, near the entrance), whether people sit alone or in groups, and how long they stay.

I’ve been conducting regular observations over the past two weeks, and I’ll soon begin organizing the data and preparing the analysis and presentation.

Please let me know if this direction is acceptable, or if you suggest any changes.

Thank you very much for your time and understanding. Syouziiye (talk) 07:22, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Syouziiye This is fine. Good luck _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:06, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

the social structures of everyday life are two articles translated by me and group member Linyuyang: English-Chinese: [https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E4%BF%AE%E7%90%86%E6%9D%83&action=history 修理权], Chinese-English: [https://en.m.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cognitive_warfare&action=history Cognitive Warfare].

Collective Wisdom: The two English-to-Chinese articles I have translated are: [https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E4%B8%AD%E5%85%B1%E5%8D%81%E5%85%AB%E5%A4%A7%E5%90%8E%E7%9A%84%E5%8F%8D%E8%85%90%E8%B4%A5&action=history 中共十八大后的反腐败]and [https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%85%AC%E6%B0%91%E7%A4%BE%E4%BC%9A&action=history 公民社会]

Please check. 白诗棋 (talk) 07:41, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

:@白诗棋 Good progress. Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:08, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

I have completed the feedback as part of the requirements for Deadline 6.

I would greatly appreciate it if you could review the feedback and let me know whether it has been written appropriately.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Ljhwa (talk) 08:23, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Ljhwa Good. But the page numbers written in that style are ok. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:09, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

I'm Dain kwak in Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 10:30 on Mondays and Fridays class

I've finished all of these articles. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Kwak_dain/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 / https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9C%84%ED%82%A4%EB%B0%B1%EA%B3%BC:%EC%83%8C%EB%93%9C%EB%B0%95%EC%8A%A4 Please check it out. Thank you Kwak dain (talk) 13:11, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Kwak dain That's a good start, but make sure to finish translating. Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:Ask me for another review once the above is fixed _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:40, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking the course Everyday Life and Social Structure.I've completed most of the Week 9 Wikipedia assignment: Article 1 Fully finished 媒体偏见 .Article 2: 礼物经济 Main content translated, but needs internal links added (for red-linked topics available in other language versions).

Due to the length, I couldn't complete both fully by deadline - my apologies. I'm submitting current progress to meet requirements but will finish the remaining links shortly. I'll update you once everything is polished. Syouziiye (talk) 15:42, 8 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Syouziiye You are doing well.

:When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:41, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

::Thank you for the detailed publishing instructions！I'll give a feedback once the article is fully published according to these guidelines. Syouziiye (talk) 09:49, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

This is yejoo Yang, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). Here are [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Yangyejoo/sandbox&oldid=1284424777 the first] and second tasks that all completed the translation. Thank you!Yangyejoo (talk) 00:42, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Yangyejoo

:: That's a good start, but make sure to finish translating. Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:: Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it.

:: Ask me for another review once the above is fixed

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:42, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

This is kiwoong kim, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class at 1 p.m. on Mondays and Fridays (Class B). Here are https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kimkiwoong/sandbox tasks that all completed the translation.Thank you! Kimkiwoong (talk) 03:53, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Kimkiwoong I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in English Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to Korean, you need to move it to Korean Wikipedia. Please use your Wikipedia sandbox on that wiki and update me when your work is moved and ready for review on the correct platform.

:Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:46, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

my project focuses on the university's first cafeteria, studying students' queuing behaviors and seat preferences during peak hours, and analyzing how these behaviors are influenced by space design, social needs, and personal habits.

Over the past two weeks, I have been conducting regular observations and will soon start organizing the data and preparing for analysis and presentations.

Please let me know if this direction is acceptable, or if you suggest making any changes. 白诗棋 (talk) 04:23, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@白诗棋 It's ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:46, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

I have finished the text translation of the Wikipedia article, please check it out.

Thank you. WANG HONGDA (talk) 04:23, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@WANG HONGDA

:I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in Chinese Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to English, you need to move it to English Wikipedia . Please use your Wikipedia sandbox on the correct Wikipedia and update me when your work is moved and ready for review on the correct platform.

:Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On English, use Template:Interlanguage link. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:47, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

::Sorry, I have moved the article to the English Wikipedia.User:WANG HONGDA/User:WANG HONGDA/三姐弟布丁事件 WANG HONGDA (talk) 06:29, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:::@WANG HONGDA Much better. Next:

:::* Several of your links point to a disambiguation pages. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget.

:::* proofread your work to remove stray code like "and 13, 2016.[1] The incident"

:::* Format your article according to WP:MOS, for example, the title of the article should not be in italics but in bold

:::* ensure that every paragraph has a reference

:::* the section on 'Public Commentary' seems like a collection of trivia (random quotations). Reliable ones can be used as sources in other places; but the section is not encyclopedic and needs to be deleted

:::* Some of your references are unreliable and need to be replaced by better ones 2, 5-9, 26 - the first is a wiki, the others are youtube. YouTube can be used only if the reference is to a reliable news source or such, but right now your citations don't provide info on author, date, etc. 26 - Facebook - is also not reliable, as social media.

:::* Your existing references should be properly formatted with metadata - most are missing author, date, and English (translated) title, for example, and have a wrong publisher listed (such as web.archive.org, which is not the publisher, but an archival service). In particular, correct all formatting errors to " web.archive.org." which is not the correct publisher

:::_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:48, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:::Review the wording for compliance with Wikipedia:Neutral point of view

:::The article heavily relies on tabloid-like news (Apple Daily, SETN), YouTube videos, and PTT posts, which are generally considered unreliable or self-published. Supplement coverage with more reputable outlets. Strengthen evidence of notability in the lead and early sections. Show that mainstream media and public institutions addressed the case significantly.

:::The lead lacks summary of key facts: Who, what, when, why it matters. It should be 2–4 paragraphs and summarize the full article. Review WP:LEAD and write a better lead section

:::Use standard Wikipedia section headings (e.g., “Background,” “Controversy,” “Aftermath,” “Legacy”).

:::Do not analyze or interpret events beyond what sources state. For example, avoid phrases like “this intensified public backlash” unless a source explicitly says so.

:::Use consistent date formats (e.g., “January 8, 2016”).

:::Avoid excessive use of blockquotes; paraphrase where possible. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:09, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I'm a student who takes morning classes on daily life and social structure. I got your feedback in Week 9 and reposted it. Here is a link to the sandbox translated into Korean: [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Jungyuna/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 sandbox1], [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Jungyuna/%EC%83%8C%EB%93%9C%EB%B0%95%EC%8A%A4 sandbox2]

Please check. Thank you. Jungyuna (talk) 04:31, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Jungyuna Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps, applicable to all your articles.

:Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:Your article has very few blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:48, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

This is LI ZIKANG, attending your 2025 Everyday Life and Social Structure class Mondays and Fridays (Class A). Here is team work [Https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lzk15038863666/sandbox1#%E5%8F%82%E8%A7%81 the first tasks] that all completed the translation.Thank you！ Lzk15038863666 (talk) 05:44, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Lzk15038863666

:: Good progress. Here are some suggestions for the next steps.

:: Complete the translation by adding the remaining content and references. Remember that all paragraphs need to be referenced, otherwise they will not count for our project and may be deleted from Wikipedia (per our syllabus and Wikipedia:Verifiability).

:: Double check you blue links. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

:: Can you add some pictures to the article? In particular, the peace flag seems to be missing any images. Ideally, you would find some on Wikimedia Commons.

:: When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:: After publishing your article, if it is a new creation, please add categories (see bottom of the original articles for categories and try to add a similar one to your article).

:: Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it.

:: You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:: When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:: When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese)

:_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:49, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@XIXIANGRUI Please move your comments to the main talk page of that editor - User talk:Xjx921 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:11, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I commented to my colleague Lee jisu's project article named'해커문화'.

Here is my [https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0%3AXisuux%2F%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5#The_article_looks_good_but... comment] please check it.

Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 06:36, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Jo HyeonSeong Please move your comments to the main talk page of that editor - 사용자토론:Xisuux - 위키백과 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:12, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

::@Hanyangprofessor2 Thank you for your feedback. I moved my comment to the main page of Xisuux. Please check it Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 00:26, 13 May 2025 (UTC)

I’ve provided feedback to Zzzzzhouziyu on her article. Here is the link to my feedback.Please check it. Thank you！ XXUXINRAN (talk) 06:44, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@XXUXINRAN Good. On Chinese Wikipedia, it's ok to leave comments in Chinese _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:13, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I have completed the translation of Wikipedia and added citations and links to the article. Please check it out.

Thank you. WANG HONGDA (talk) 07:01, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@WANG HONGDA See my feedback above _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:15, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I’ve provided feedback to Zzzzzhouziyu on her article. [https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Zzzzzhouziyu#Feedback_2 Here is the link to my feedback].Please check it. Thank you！ Laoxinyi (talk) 07:19, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Laoxinyi Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:15, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@ZixuanHE Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:04, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Zzzzzhouziyu Your feedback is good.

:As for the article in your sandbox, it seems that the Chinese reviewers have some concerns about two issues. First, is the quality of the translation - I cannot help with this, as I don't speak Chinese, but you can ask for help, either from AI, or from the reviewers themselves (ask them to show you specific examples of bad translation to help you understand).

:The latest comment translates as Wikify, which usually means you need to use more blue links and/or other wiki code. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . I see some definitely not linked content in see also section - link those articles or remove the text. Second example in 'In popular culture' needs a reference - add one, or remove it.The last few sentences in the Causes section needs a reference, again - add one or remove the unreferenced sentences. And remember, again, if you don't understand why the reviewers are unhappy with your work, you should talk to them directly and ask them what needs to be fixed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:10, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I have completed the requirement for Deadline 6. I left two comments on the user talk page of Uuueol—one giving positive feedback on their overall contribution to the article, and another offering constructive suggestions. Here is the link to my feedback:link

Cuicuizan (talk) 09:28, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Cuicuizan Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:11, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I'm currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I've completed Deadline 6 by leaving feedback on two articles — both comments are posted here.

Please check. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 09:34, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Uuueol Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:12, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Jzhdylb It's ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:12, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Hanyangdaxue Yes, it's ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:12, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I have completed Deadline 6 by reviewing another student's article. I provided feedback on the article “2024 Central Europe floods”, and left my comments on the user’s talk page.

Here is the link to my feedback:

[https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:Skymir1127#Hello!_I'm_reviewing_your_article_titled_%E2%80%9C2024_Central_Europe_floods%E2%80%9D_as_part_of_our_Wikipedia_assignment. https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=사용자토론:Skymir1127#Hello!I'm_reviewing_your_article_titled“2024_Central_Europe_floods”_as_part_of_our_Wikipedia_assignment.] 김선길 (talk) 15:04, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@김선길 Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:13, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure. Thank you very much for your valuable suggestions. I have made the corresponding revisions and completed the translation of the article. Please check it. Thank you. Xuan6699 (talk) 15:14, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Xuan6699 Very good, you are almost done.

:At least one of your links point to a disambiguation page. To easily see which, go to your preferences and enable the "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange" gadget, then fix it.

:When your translation is finished, if you are creating a new article, you can publish it (move it the mainspace). See Wikipedia:Moving a page for how to do this. If you are expanding an existing article, see WP:MERGE instead.

:You should also link the article to the original version you are translating it from by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button - see here for how to to it: Help:Interlanguage links - Wikipedia

:When you publish your article in English, please add {{Educational assignment}} to its talk page.

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page Template:Translated page (if the translation is to English).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:16, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Please check it Thank you!—- LIANG06 (talk) 15:19, 9 May 2025 (UTC)

:@LIANG06 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:16, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am currently studying Collective Wisdom in Everyday Life and Social Structure and Practice.

I have completed the requirements of Deadline 6. I left a comment on the user discussion page of XIXIANGRUI - here is my feedback link:https://w.wiki/E4Nq Thank you very much, Professor，Have a nice weekend! Hanyangdaxue (talk) 00:46, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Hanyangdaxue Good, and well done using an URL shortener for linking :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:28, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

User talk:2024099889심현지#Article Translation Task Feedback - 2024096508 Kim Seoyoung 2024096508 Kim Seoyoung (talk) 03:41, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

:@2024096508 Kim Seoyoung Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:29, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@0701ysy I noticed that your work is on the wrong Wikipedia (in English Wikipedia sandbox). If you are translating to Korean, you need to move it to Korean Wikipedia. Please use your Wikipedia sandbox on the correct Wikipedia, fix any errors in links and references and other code, and update me when your work is moved and ready for review on the correct platform.

:After the move, check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크. Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:30, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I take a collective intelligence in practice class.

I've completed my Week 10 assignment.

Please check and let me know if there is anything that needs to be modified.

Thank you. Khji0620 (talk) 06:48, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Khji0620 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:30, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am currently taking the courses Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

Here is my translation progress. So far, I have completed the Chinese-to-English translation of two articles. These articles are related to Everyday Life and Social Structure and [https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Xjx921/Smashing_the_Gang_of_Four# Collective Intelligence in Practice]. please check. Thank you! Xjx921 (talk) 09:22, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Xjx921 Have you seen my feedback from few weeks ago at, now archived at User_talk:Hanyangprofessor2/Archive_5#Deadline_4(Week5)_--XI_JIAXIN ?

:Because I just checked two random errors I pointed out back then and they are still present in the article. Please fix all the issues I've pointed out, and report your progress to me. Please explicitly tell me how you fixed each and every error I reported. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:33, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am currently taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I have completed this week’s assignment. I left a constructive comment on the user talk page of Xuan6699.

Here is the link to my feedback: [https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Xuan6699 link]. Xjx921 (talk) 09:36, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Xjx921 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:34, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I'm YU JIE, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week10 . Please check here.Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 10:19, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

:@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:34, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am enrolled in the morning class of Everyday Life and Social Structure.

I have completed the Korean translations for the two topics I selected: [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Day123kk/%EC%83%8C%EB%93%9C%EB%B0%95%EC%8A%A4 Animal Welfare and Rights in India] and [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Day123kk/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 China’s Gender Imbalance].

However, I encountered continuous errors when trying to create citations for the China’s Gender Imbalance section. I was unable to resolve the issue, so I am submitting it as is.

If you know a way to fix this, I would appreciate it if you could let me know.

Thank you. Day123kk (talk) 16:34, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Day123kk Come to my office and I'll show you how to fix the reference errors. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:38, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Park suhyun (talk) 18:12, 10 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Park suhyun Good, but there are still some errors to fix. Some Korean reviewers have complained about the unnatural (machine) quality of your translations. There are code and reference errors that need to be fixed (broken templates and references).

:Also, check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Korean, use :ko:틀:임시링크.

:Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it or how to fix other errors _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:40, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Park suhyun Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:40, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Park suhyun See my feedback above; this is a very early draft and it needs to be finished. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:41, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Youn1002 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:42, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Koolujman Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:42, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I have left my feedback for User:Ljhwa on her user talk page.

Please check. Thank you.

Yeonseo Koo (talk) 05:36, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Yeonseo Koo Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:42, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Yhan0619 Very good.

:Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .

:Since you are expanding an existing article, please WP:MERGE it to the original one.

:When you publish your article in Chinese, please add :zh:Template:Educational assignment to its talk page.

:When translating from a foreign-language Wikipedia article, you should make it clear your work is a translation. Read more about this requirement here: WP:TFOLWP . Please add the following template to the article's talk page - :zh:Template:Translated page (if it is in Chinese).

:Please monitor the history of your page as well as your talk page on that project for feedback from reviewers. If your article is declined (moved back to draft/user space) you'll need to address any issues raised in order to republish it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:44, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I have left my feedback for User:A15928872517 on her user talk page.

Please check. Thank you. A1246632822 (talk) 07:03, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:@A1246632822 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:44, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I have left my feedback for User:A1246632822 on her user talk page.

Please check. Thank you. A15928872517 (talk) 08:34, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:@A15928872517 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:44, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I evaluated this translated article.I have left my feedback for [https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk%3AChensiwen%2F%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92%2FClimate_change_in_North_Korea#I_have_commented_on_this_%E2%80%9CClimate_change_in_North_Korea%E2%80%9D. "Chensiwen/沙盒/Climate change in North Korea"] on the user talk page.

Please check. Thank you. Chensiyu2004 (talk) 09:13, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Chensiyu2004 Please move your comment to that user's main talk page at User talk:Chensiwen _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:45, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Chensiyu2004 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:45, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Yhan0619 My suggestion is that next time you ask for suggestions earlier than just before the final deadline. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:46, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I'm taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.I have finished my weekly wiki editing for week10.Please check here.Thank you Ryuthefang (talk) 10:37, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Ryuthefang Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:46, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure (class A) and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time.

I have left my feedback for User talk:Ryuthefang on her user talk page.

Please check. Thank you. Chensiwen (talk) 10:38, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Chensiwen On English Wikipedia, your feedback should be in English. If you want to leave feedback in Chinese, do it on Chinese Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:47, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I have provided feedback on another student’s article on their user talk page: [https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:Day123kk#%ED%94%BC%EB%93%9C%EB%B0%B1:_%EC%83%8C%EB%93%9C%EB%B0%95%EC%8A%A4_%EB%AC%B8%EC%84%9C%EC%97%90_%EB%8C%80%ED%95%9C_%EC%A0%9C%EC%95%88 User talk:Day123kk]

Please kindly confirm. Thank you. Jungyuna (talk) 12:00, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Jungyuna On Korean Wikipedia it is best to leave feedback in Korean _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:47, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am a student in the course Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have provided feedback on the article draft by Kim Seo-young.

Here is the link to my feedback: [insert link]

Thank you for checking. Day123kk (talk) 12:51, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Day123kk Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:48, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B).

I left my feedback for User:Yeonseo Koo on her talk page.

Please check it. Thank you. Leorhee04 (talk) 13:06, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Leorhee04 On Korean Wikipedia it is best to leave feedback in Korean _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:48, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

::I thought I had to leave comment in English so that you can understand. Here is [https://ko.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:Yeonseo_Koo#Deadline_6(Week10)_-_Jeongwoo_Rhee talk page] which I wrote my comment in Korean. Leorhee04 (talk) 09:58, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I'm Qu Hongyu, taking the course Everyday Life & Understanding Wikipedia.

I left my feedback for User_talk:Day123kk on her talk page.

And I also have finished my weekly wiki editing for week10 and week11, total more than 20edits.Please check [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Special:Contributions/Pineappleq&target=Pineappleq&offset=&limit=20 here].

Thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 14:42, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Pineappleq Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:48, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B).

I left my feedback on https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/사용자토론:Jungyuna/연습장 here.

Please check it. Thank you Hyunseo050907 (talk) 15:19, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Hyunseo050907 Please move your comment from a subpage to the main talk page of your fellow student (사용자토론:Jungyuna). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:50, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structure and Collective Intelligence in Practice.

I have left my feedback for User talk:L01yy11 on her user talk page.

Please check. Thank you.

Kylo09 (talk) 16:41, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Kylo09 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:50, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday life and social structure at 1PM(class B).

I left my feedback for https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/사용자토론:Yrmisoee#피드백 on her https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/사용자:Yrmisoee/연습장

Please check it. Thank you. Kimkiwoong (talk) 02:01, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Kimkiwoong Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:50, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand （13:00-14:30）Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time (14:30-16:00）.

I have completed my comment. Please check it.[https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Chensiyu2004#文章建议]

Thank you. Ttkx11 (talk) 04:11, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Ttkx11 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:51, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@김규리05 Please move your comment from a subpage to the main talk page of your fellow student (사용자토론:Jungyuna). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:51, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Chensiyu2004 Your blue links do not appear to be correct. Check whether all blue links are identical. Make sure you link to relevant articles in your target Wikipedia, not to other languages, when a relevant article exists. When a topic exists in another language than the one you are writing and results in a red link in your target Wikipedia article, you can use this tool to add a link to the original Wikipedia. On Chinese, use :zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . Stop by my office for help if you need a demonstration on how to use it. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:53, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Chensiyu2004 Ok, just a reminder that weekly edits should be done on public articles, not in your sandbox _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:54, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

I am taking Everyday Life and Social Structureand and Collective Intelligence in Practice at the same time . I'm currently encountering a problem. This is the [https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%AC%AC%E4%BA%8C%E6%AC%A1%E5%9B%BD%E5%85%B1%E5%86%85%E6%88%98 second article] in my group's translation task, but this translating from Chinese to English is quite challenging for me. Can I switch to a different article? Perhaps you could recommend a Chinese to English article for me. Thank you very much！Professor. Lzk15038863666 (talk) 06:51, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

:@Lzk15038863666 You can chose a different topic. Please review the lists here 维基百科:优良条目 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书

:and check which articles don't have English equivalents, and choose something from them to translate.

:Other suggestions are available at Wikipedia:WikiProject China/Requested articles _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:59, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

::Can this [https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%BB%A3%E5%B7%9E%E5%BB%BA%E6%A5%AD%E5%A4%A7%E5%BB%88%E7%81%AB%E7%81%BD article] be translated? I have checked that there is no corresponding English version. Lzk15038863666 (talk) 08:58, 13 May 2025 (UTC)

I have left my feedback for [https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:A1246632822 User:A1246632822] on her [https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:A1246632822 user talk page].

Please check. Thank you～ Chensiyu2004 (talk) 13:53, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

My name is Yerim Kim (2024009943) and I am taking the Understanding of Daily Life and Social Structure class (Class B). I have completed the assignment for week 10, please check it at [https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0%3A2024_%EC%A4%91%EC%95%99_%EC%9C%A0%EB%9F%BD_%ED%99%8D%EC%88%98#Deadline6(week10)_-_Kim_Yerim(%EA%B9%80%EC%98%88%EB%A6%BC) this link]. Yrmisoee (talk) 04:15, 13 May 2025 (UTC)

I am a student who takes Everyday Life and Social Structure morning classes (class A). This link is my feedback left on another user's Talk page.

Please check it. Thank you. 2024099889심현지 (talk) 01:10, 14 May 2025 (UTC)