:Talk:2014 Mayflower–Vilonia tornado/GA1

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Nominator: {{User|EF5}} 14:02, 3 February 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 03:04, 24 February 2025 (UTC)

{{ping|EF5}} reviewing as part of WP:GARC. 750h+ 03:04, 24 February 2025 (UTC)

:750h+, it's been five days, just a reminder ping. I'll get to reviewing your GARC later today, sorry it's taken so long. :) — E_F⁵ 20:09, 28 February 2025 (UTC)

::Reviewing this, my comments will be below. 750h+ 04:04, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

;lead

• {{green|In the evening hours of April 27, 2014}} remove "hours"

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

• {{green|retained peak windspeeds of 190}} from what i've searched "wind speeds" is always two separate words

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

• {{green|first time as it entered into the city}} remove "into"

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

;meteorological synopsis

• No problems here. 750h+ 04:24, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

;tornado summary

• {{green|There, two homes were destroyed and another}} add a comma after 'destroyed'

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

::Looks fine, happy to pass. 750h+ 03:13, 4 March 2025 (UTC)

• {{green|A recreational vehicle dealership}} ==> "A recreational vehicle (RV) dealership" since you use the acronym later.

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

• {{green|highway was completely destroyed}} 'completely' is redundant

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

• {{green|some poorly-anchored homes were}} remove the hyphen

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

• {{green|high-end EF4 strength, a town which was struck by}} remove "a town"

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

• {{green|were all completely destroyed in downtown}} 'completely' is redundant

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

• {{green|The crumpled remains of a metal fertilizer tank was found}} ==> "The crumpled remains of a metal fertilizer tank were found"

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

• {{green|Meadows subdivision at the northeast}} ==> "Meadows subdivision on the northeast"

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

• {{green|revealed that most of the homes}}

::? E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

:::i don't know what i meant to say here 750h+ 03:12, 4 March 2025 (UTC)

• {{green|remained on the ground for 56 minutes, and traveled}} removed the comma

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

;aftermath

• {{green|Sixteen people lost their lives as a direct result}} ==> "Sixteen people were killed as a direct result" MOS:EUPHEMISM

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

• {{green|ditch near the home were still standing, and that}} remove the comma

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

;case studies

• {{green|researchers from the Texas Tech University}} remove "the"

::{{done}}. E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

Sources and images look fine. {{ping|EF5}} i'm happy to pass once my concerns above are addressed. 750h+ 04:24, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

:{{ping|750h+}} How does it look? E_F⁵ 13:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)

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