:Talk:Erika Jayne

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Soc314: Wikipedia Critique an Article Assignment

This is simply for a school assignment, but I have a couple suggestions for the page. Perhaps it would be better if some of the claims were more neutral. For instance, "Jayne has received praise for her stage presence and voice during live performances" and the citation used is potentially problematic. The source is a random blog post/list, but I guess it may not matter because multiple obscure blog posts could be evident of her fan base. Another sentence, "She soon became a fan favorite on the show and her appearance was well received by the public" has similar implications as the aforementioned sentence. The source was from an E! journalist, who may not be representative of the entire Real Housewives' viewership. Overall this is a well written article and I would like to see a photograph of Erika to be featured in the article. Mikerep (talk) 20:20, 22 February 2017 (UTC)

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The article reads like a publicity piece, working from far too many poor and promotional sources.

One of the first problems to address is her notability, which is almost lost among all the trivia. I've made some initial attempts to address this in the lede as a start. --Ronz (talk) 16:44, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

Over Writing

This page is complete crap - this woman's life prior to approx 2014 is not of any importance. This page goes on and on about a woman who is a nobody and who was not even a public figure until a few years ago when she went on a reality show in her late 40s. Up until that point she was a housewife and wikipedia doesn't report on reguolar housewives or everyone in the world would have a page. All of this information is irrelevant and broad. What is missing is recent legal events on public record related to this woman being sued for 15 million dollars in two lawsuits. That's of public significance yet fails to appear on this page.

This page seriously needs cleaned up or deleted. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:540:C400:2CA6:18CF:88D7:5451:5CAE (talk) 16:28, 19 June 2019 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 9 October 2021

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The page states that Ms. Jayne met Tom Girardi at Chasen’s in 1997; Chasen’s closed on April 1, 1995. 172.89.173.148 (talk) 12:50, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

:File:Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made.Sirdog (talk) 15:49, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Dancing With The Stars

Hello! Could someone who is better at editing Wikipedia than I am please update the article to include that she participated in Season 24 of Dancing With The Stars? I came here looking for info about that and thought I had imagined it, but it was just missing from the article. PupGoomba (talk) 21:16, 13 May 2022 (UTC)