:Template:Did you know nominations/Ijeoma Oluo

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• ... that Seattle author Ijeoma Oluo has sparked uncomfortable conversations nationwide about racism, misogynoir, intersectionality, Black Lives Matter, and the #MeToo movement?
• ALT1: ...that many of Seattle author Ijeoma Oluo's articles about racism, misogynoir, intersectionality, Black Lives Matter, and the #MeToo movement have gone viral?
• ALT2: ...that after the shooting of Trayvon Martin, Seattle author Ijeoma Oluo started writing about her social concerns on a blog that she had devoted to food writing?
• ALT3: ...that the Facebook account of Seattle author Ijeoma Oluo was temporarily suspended after she posted screenshots of racist messages directed toward her?

:* Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Harisal

5x expanded by Antonioatrylia (talk), Dennis Bratland (talk), Innisfree987 (talk), Lonehexagon (talk), and Monikasj (talk). Nominated by Dennis Bratland (talk) at 18:54, 6 February 2018 (UTC).

:*{{bcc|Antonioatrylia|Dennis Bratland|Innisfree987|Lonehexagon|Monikasj}}I will review this nomination. epicgenius (talk) 02:08, 14 February 2018 (UTC)

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• In "Accolades", you might want to reword {{tq|Oluo has been named to lists of was}}. I don't understand what this means.

:Hook interest: I'm not sure, because this isn't mentioned explicitly in the article. However, it might be a problem with this hook itself. See directly below.

:The words used in this hook imply something else than what is in the article. While Oluo might definitely have "sparked" "uncomfortable" conversations, I don't think this is objective enough. The page says {{tq|Her writing covers misogynoir, intersectionality, online harassment, the Black Lives Matter movement, race, economics, parenting, feminism and social justice}}, which is sourced. So I suggest this: (See above. epicgenius (talk) 02:08, 14 February 2018 (UTC))

• I rewrote the Accolades section using more straightforward wording. Any of he suggested alternate hooks is fine. --Dennis Bratland (talk) 03:40, 14 February 2018 (UTC)

• Thanks for the review, and for all the work that everyone has done on this page. Any of the suggested hooks would be fine, but I prefer ALT2. Shameran81 (talk) 03:52, 14 February 2018 (UTC)

• {{re|Dennis Bratland|Shameran81}} OK, I have picked ALT2. I have also moved the alt hooks to the top of the page. Unless any of the other contributors have objections, this is good to go. epicgenius (talk) 14:16, 14 February 2018 (UTC)