Draft:Toby Mottershead

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Toby Mottershead is a Scottish blues musician, singer, guitarist, and composer, known for his mastery of traditional blues, slide guitar technique, and work as a film composer. He is the frontman of the blues bands Jawbone Walk and The Black Diamond Express, and has been praised for his authentic interpretation of early blues styles.{{Cite web |date=2024-05-01 |title=Full Steam Ahead For Scotland's Black Diamond Express |url=https://www.americanbluesscene.com/2024/05/full-steam-ahead-for-scotlands-black-diamond-express/ |access-date=2025-03-11 |website=American Blues Scene |language=en-US}}

Early Life and Musical Influences

Toby Mottershead developed a passion for blues music at an early age, deeply influenced by the raw, expressive sounds of Blind Willie Johnson, Charlie Patton, and Fred MacDowell.{{Cite web |title=Blues! Roots of the Blues: 4 star review by Conor Matchett |url=https://broadwaybaby.com/shows/blues-roots-of-the-blues/705542 |access-date=2025-03-11 |website=broadwaybaby.com |language=en}} His playing style reflects a commitment to preserving traditional blues techniques while bringing his own personality and energy to the genre.

Musical Career

Mottershead has gained recognition as both a solo artist and a frontman. His performances have been described as "a master of traditional blues" and "thundering and technically brilliant" by American Blues Scene.{{Cite web |date=2022-02-24 |title=Jawbone Walk with Nicole Smit Upstage the Headline Acts at Europe's Top Blues Festival |url=https://www.americanbluesscene.com/2022/08/jawbone-walk-with-nicole-smit-upstage-the-headline-acts-at-europes-top-blues-festival/ |access-date=2025-03-11 |website=American Blues Scene |language=en-US}}

= Solo Performances and Blues Scholarship =

Mottershead has presented critically acclaimed blues showcases at festivals and venues, including the Edinburgh Fringe Festival and Edinburgh Jazz & Blues Festival.[4] His Edinburgh Festival Fringe show was lauded for its range of blues styles and its immersive, educational approach to the genre. The Scotsman described his performance as "naked blues with rough-grained eloquence"{{Cite web |title=Jack of Diamonds |url=https://tobymottershead.bandcamp.com/ |access-date=2025-03-11 |website=Jack of Diamonds |language=en}} while another festival review noted the emotional depth of his acapella performances, particularly the chain gang song "Rosie" and the Scottish folk classic "The Parting Glass."

= Jawbone Walk =

As the leader of Jawbone Walk, Mottershead has brought early blues to new audiences. The band, featuring Nicole Smit as a guest vocalist, received critical acclaim at the Edinburgh Jazz & Blues Festival in 2022, with David Scott of The Edinburgh Reporter stating that their performance "upstaged the headline acts". The band's repertoire spans Mississippi Delta blues, Chicago blues, gospel, and rhythm & blues, with a focus on lesser-known classics from blues legends such as Little Willie John, Guitar Slim, and Otis Rush.{{Cite web |title=Biography |url=https://www.jawbonewalk.com |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20231030040909/http://www.jawbonewalk.com/ |archive-date=30 October 2023|url-status=unfit}}

= The Black Diamond Express =

Mottershead is also a founding member of The Black Diamond Express, an award-winning Scottish blues band known for their energetic performances and deep connection to blues traditions. The band has been described as "an unstoppable force... Hell Bound!" Their music blends fiery original compositions, traditional blues, and work songs, captivating audiences with their intense stage presence and musicianship.{{Cite web |title=The Black Diamond Express |url=http://theblackdiamondexpress.com/ |access-date=2025-03-11 |website=theblackdiamondexpress.com}}

= Film Composition and Other Work =

In addition to live performances, Mottershead has contributed to film scores. His compositions for BAFTA nominated "Zombie Musical" (2011) and "Riptide" (2020, Lyre Productions) showcase his ability to adapt blues techniques to cinematic storytelling.

Critical Reception

Mottershead's musicianship and stage presence have been widely praised:

The Scotsman: "He can sing naked blues with rough-grained eloquence."
American Blues Scene: "A master of traditional blues... thundering and technically brilliant."
American Blues Scene: "Jawbone Walk steals the show, if not the entire festival, with a scintillating display of lovingly crafted authentic songs."

Legacy and Influence

Mottershead continues to play an essential role in the Scottish blues scene, helping to preserve and promote traditional blues while introducing audiences to forgotten gems from the genre's golden era. His blend of historical knowledge, technical skill, and emotive performance solidifies his reputation as a leading figure in modern blues music.