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Talk:2003 Football League First Division play-off final/GA1

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:This review is transcluded from Talk:2003 Football League First Division play-off Final/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:34, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Shall be reviewing for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 10:34, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
  2. :a (prose): {{GAList/check|y}} b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|u}}
  3. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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  6. It is broad in its coverage.
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  9. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
  10. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
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  12. It is stable.
  13. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
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  15. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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  18. Overall:
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=Lead=

  • "Neil Warnock, the Sheffield United manager, was sent off for arguing with the referee." - What exactly was Warnock arguing about that got him sent off the pitch?
  • :Repeated criticism of the ref, re-worded. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 17:01, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
  • Wikilink 2004-05 season in the third paragraph to the appropriate article
  • :Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 17:01, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

=Route to the final=

=Background=

=Summary=

  • "with a low drive into the corner of the net from 20 yards after receiving a pass from Miller." - perhaps use the convert template on the text highlighted in bold?
  • :Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 17:01, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
  • "The Sheffield United manager Neil Warnock was sent to the stands at half time after arguing with the referee." - what was Warnock arguing with the referee about?
  • :Explained above and fixed here too. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 17:01, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
  • "No further goals were scored as the match ended 3–0 to Wolves who secured their place in the top tier of English football for the first time in almost 20 years." - needs to be cited since the BBC Sport Live source and 11v11 don't specially mention it was Wolves' first promotion to the top tier of English football for nearly 20 years
  • :Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 17:01, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

=Post-match=

  • Jack Hayward does not need to be wikilinked here since he is already so earlier in the article
  • :Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 17:01, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
  • "and were relegated back to the First Division for the 2004–05 season." - shouldn't that be the {{xt|2003–04 season}} with the wikilink amended?
  • :No, I'm talking about the season after next. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 17:01, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
  • ::Then for this sentence should the First Division be changed to the Championship since that was what the league was renamed to that season? MWright96 (talk) 18:21, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
  • :::Yes, I see the point. That's going to confuse so let's go with "back to the second tier of English football". Cheers. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 19:21, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
  • I believe the mention of the term First Division in the third paragraph should be wikilinked to 2003–04 Football League First Division
  • :See above. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 17:01, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

=References=

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the suggestions made above. MWright96 (talk) 11:47, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

::{{U|MWright96}} all comments addressed and/or responded to above. Cheers for the review, much appreciated. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 17:01, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

:::{{reply|The Rambling Man}} Just one comment made to one of your replies that will need some consideration. MWright96 (talk) 18:26, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

::::{{U|MWright96}} Thanks, adjusted that now. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 19:21, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

:::::{{reply|The Rambling Man}} Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:58, 25 October 2020 (UTC)