Talk:2007 AT&T 250/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:12, 18 February 2018 (UTC)

Will be taking on this review and expect comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 10:12, 18 February 2018 (UTC)

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• "It returned to the schedule in 1993 and had been on the schedule every year" - reptition of schedule
• "Wimmer, who entered the race with three consecutive top-five finishes and five consecutive top-tens," - same issue as above
• "David Reutimann, Regan Smith, Greg Biffle, Marcos Ambrose, Bobby Hamilton Jr., and Jason Leffler rounded out the top ten." - you're missing David Ragan from this sentence.

• It would be helpful to the general reader to have the knowledge what the fastest lap times set by Scott Wimmer were

• The 250-lap race began at 8:00 p.m. EDT, televised live on ESPN2." - {{xt|The 250-lap race began at 8:00 p.m. EDT, and was televised live in the United States on ESPN2.}}
• These two sources [http://columbustelegram.com/news/hamlin-finishes-off-what-almirola-starts-to-win-busch-race/article_53a521c8-00b1-55fd-97f4-bafff7424d6c.html] [http://lacrossetribune.com/couleenews/news/local/fashionably-late-hamlin-wins-milwaukee-mile-busch-race/article_5417ce0e-306a-56eb-b50b-10816ec9d000.html] would help to clarify some major points in this sub-section like why Hamlin could not land in the infield and which of Edwards' tire went flat and how that came to be

• Wikilink ESPN and do the same in the lead

• Refs 7 and 20 lead to a 404 page and will need archiving.

Overall quite the well-written article we have here. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 08:05, 19 February 2018 (UTC)

:{{ping|MWright96}} Done all. Let me know if there is anything else or if you have an article you would like me to review. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 20:37, 19 February 2018 (UTC)

::{{reply|Bcschneider53}} There's nothing else that needs rectifying so I can now pass this review. MWright96 (talk) 21:09, 19 February 2018 (UTC)