Talk:AC/DC/Archive 4#Copy edit

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To do

I've requested a peer review a few days ago, but I'm very busy right now, so I made a to-do list to improve the article. No-Bullet 03:00, 20 October 2006 (UTC)

Genres

Last night, Helltopay27 added Classic metal to the genre listing. Now, this morning, an unregistered user removed it and I was just about to remove it myself when it was initally added last night, but when I read the classic metal article, it read:

"Classic metal bands are typically characterized by thumping fast basslines, not so fast heavy, but "clean", riffs, extended lead guitar solos, high pitched vocals and anthemic choruses."

Now, in my opinion, this sounds a lot like a typical AC/DC song. However, I'm not an expert in music, so, I would like everyone's opinions on whether you consider AC/DC a classic metal band or not and whether we should include this in the article before I add it back in or not. HK51 08:40, 21 October 2006 (UTC)

I'd consider AC/DC to be a hard rock band, or blues rock, but not classic rock. They really made rock harder than anyone else did. Also, make sure that they are not refered to as a metal or heavy metal band, since, according to the many AC/DC biographies I've read, they seem to hate being called that. '74 Jailbreak '74 Jailbreak 16:07, 31 October 2006 (UTC)

'74 Jailbreak is right. They are a hard rock band. Several old copies of Rolling Stone, interviews with them, unofficial biographies, etc, all say this. They are blues influenced, with alot of scales from it. If anyone doesn't agree, I'd like to hear your comments.--Bass Masta 09:55, 7 November 2006 (UTC)

:Alot of the solos and riffs that Angus plays mostly come from the Blue Scale and alot of other scales. On what Bass Masta said, it's true. 124.178.34.146 11:08, 16 February 2007 (UTC)

Nah, I wasn't suggesting they were heavy metal. I just thought the description of Classic metal - "Classic metal bands are typically characterized by thumping fast basslines, not so fast heavy, but "clean", riffs, extended lead guitar solos, high pitched vocals and anthemic choruses" - sounded a lot like a typical AC/DC song. Like I said, I'm no music expert, so I thought I'd leave this open to discussion. HK51

:"Also, make sure that they are not refered to as a metal or heavy metal band, since, according to the many AC/DC biographies I've read, they seem to hate being called that."

:Whether they "like" it or not is irrelevant; some of they're music is metal (for instance, note their inclusion on VH1's 40 Greatest Metal Songs).Helltopay27 00:24, 31 December 2006 (UTC)

::I think that they would know more about what type of music they play than VH1. When i think of classic metal, i think of bands like iron madden and accept, not bands like acdc. when i think of heavy metal, i think of bands like slipknot and system of a down, not acdc. I and most other people i know think ACDC is as much metal as jimmy hindrix. We should just keep hard rock as the only genre. Captanpluto123 02:34, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

:::We should be going by what reliable sources say, not what you think or what other people you know think. Removing heavy metal from the genre listing is understandable, but why remove rock and roll and blues rock? ĤĶ51Łalk 21:28, 9 January 2007 (UTC)

Motörhead influenced by AC/DC?

Could someone tell me when and where they ever said that? Until proven otherwise, I removed this from the article. Roda 18:00, 26 October 2006 (UTC)

last album and tour

where did you get Angus' quote? are you sure this new album will be the last one for the band? are they going to split? i know the members are gettin' old and all, but, why is this new album the last one for the band? please respond. Jailbreaker22 16:58, 4 November 2006 (UTC)

:That quote has been here a long time ago, sourced with the marshall pdf. I heard it something like that, so i left it. Now, i couldn't find a reliable source, so i deleted it. No-Bullet 19:27, 5 November 2006 (UTC)

FA?

Well, about a week ago, Daniel Bryant told me in my user talk page that the ac/dc article could be a FA, and i was thinking in nominate it. What do you think?? No-Bullet 19:27, 5 November 2006 (UTC)

:Well, I've no problems with it being nominated...but I'm not entirely sure if it's ready for FA status, it needs some expansion, especially in the Brian Johnson era section. The Influences section could also do with some work. But if other people think it might be ready, I say go ahead with it. HK51 21:21, 5 November 2006 (UTC)

::OK, then please help me to expand those sections. Thanks =) No-Bullet 00:51, 6 November 2006 (UTC)

::The influences section only named bands, so i've moved it to List of tributes to AC/DC in popular culture. No-Bullet 01:12, 6 November 2006 (UTC)

:::Ok, I'll do my best to find a few new things. Oh, do you know how to cite something from a DVD documentary as a reference? HK51 18:23, 6 November 2006 (UTC)

::::You could cite it with the ref tags like a normal reference. No-Bullet 17:20, 8 November 2006 (UTC)

The DVD didn't give out a whole lot of information that wasn't already in the article :( Hmmm...I guess I could buy a book on the band or something. Either way, digging up information on AC/DC is hard! HK51 20:59, 25 November 2006 (UTC)

Why is it that the artical says that Angus said the new album would be a double, yet the reference says it was Brian? Ferdiaob 02:48, 04 January 2007 (UTC)

:Fixed. No-Bullet (TalkContribs) 04:05, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

Official Biography

Just out of pure curiosity, has there EVER been an official biography of AC/DC on either DVD or Book? Ive found countless unofficial ones and i know that AC/DC has an official biographer, but ive never found an officially sanctioned bio. Ferdiaob 01:37, 06 December 2006 (UTC)

I've heard that there is an official biography in the making.

There is, it's called "The Story of AC/DC: Let There Be Rock" by Susan Masino

http://www.amazon.com/Story-AC-DC-There-Rock/dp/0825634695 MwM 18:40, 21 February 2007 (UTC)

Picture

The Artist picture of the band in the infobox is small and kind of blurry. Can someone find a better one? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by User:Necko (talkcontribs){{#if:22:14, 7 December 2006| 22:14, 7 December 2006|}}.

Influences

I think we should remove that section for both articles, it just lists bands from Musicmatch and AMG. What do you think? Cheers. No-Bullet (TalkContribs) 18:35, 10 December 2006 (UTC)

:True. I'd be happier if we could find sources which show each of these band's actually saying AC/DC influenced them, if not, just cut it. ĤĶ51Łalk 22:10, 10 December 2006 (UTC)

:Having said the above, it would be good if we could maybe find some sources showing a few bands saying they've been influenced by AC/DC, and also if we could even find out who influenced AC/DC themselves (I'd always heard Little Richard was an influence). This would make a great addition to the article imo, but not until we find sources! ĤĶ51Łalk 22:46, 13 December 2006 (UTC)

::Any of the unofficial biographies will include quotes from Angus about Chuck Berry etc, plus Malcolm's Rolling Stones influence etc. Maybe start there. I would but I haven't got the books with me. Bretonbanquet 22:51, 13 December 2006 (UTC)

Members

Did we not agree a few months ago to use the "Classic" line-up in this section? I.e. the one with Bon Scott? It seems the most relevant to me. The Dave Evans line-up was of little impact whatsoever. ĤĶ51Łalk 22:55, 13 December 2006 (UTC)

:Yeah, I don't know why people think that lineup is so important. The classic formation is also more suitable for that section. No-Bullet (TalkContribs) 23:24, 14 December 2006 (UTC)

Agreed, I'll add the "Classic" line-up back in now. ĤĶ51Łalk 23:31, 14 December 2006 (UTC)

::Who says the "classic" line-up included Mark Evans and not Cliff Williams? It seems hard to justify, and "classic" is a POV word... Bretonbanquet 16:25, 17 December 2006 (UTC)

Well, that was just what was on the archive page when I copy/pasted it; Cliff Williams is probably more relevent. Well then we should find an alternative to the word "Classic", because I just don't see the point of having the Dave Evans/Original line-up there, that line-up just wasn't important; they only released one single IIRC, which was later re-recorded., therefore, I don't know why people think D. Evans deserves a special mention in that section over Bon Scott.

User:209.105.206.97 wants the Dave Evans line-up there (from my talk page) "because that is what the earlist lineup is", but I don't see the point in that argument. It's the earliest line-up sure, but why should it get preference over a Bon Scott line-up? ĤĶ51Łalk 16:36, 17 December 2006 (UTC)

:I certainly don't see the point in having the original Dave Evans line-up there - they might have been the first but they're hardly vital to the story. Isn't there a timeline of line-ups somewhere? If so, then the only line-up you need to have separately is the current one. A lot of people would argue that it's the "classic" line-up anyway, the line-up that recorded "Back In Black". I just don't see any great relevance in plucking another line-up from the 70s and putting it in a separate section, just because they recorded the best music according to most of us. Bretonbanquet 18:08, 17 December 2006 (UTC)

The member timeline page is: Past members of AC/DC. I see a relevance to a Bon Scott line-up in that Scott is very integral to the story, it was with him the band earned their international success. Having said that, you're right, it is hard to justify any line-up as "Classic", so I'd be happy with just the current line-up there, just as long as the Dave Evans line-up isn't placed there as well. ĤĶ51Łalk 23:07, 17 December 2006 (UTC)

I don't think there should be a classic lineup section. classic is an opinion. Wikipedia deals in facts, not opinions. I consider the first line up the original lineup. I also think that bon scott was the best singer of the three; also that brian johnson was the most influential. we should just classify the lineups by date, not by which one was the classic one or not. Captanpluto123 05:52, 21 December 2006 (UTC)

Lead Section

Since Orane mentioned in the FA nomination that the lead section does not meet the criteria. I think we should rewrite the section, so I've been trying this in my sandbox (User:No-Bullet/Sandbox). What do you think? No-Bullet (TalkContribs) 23:24, 14 December 2006 (UTC)

:Looks good to me, great job, makes a welcome improvement on the old lead. Add it in as soon as you can. ĤĶ51Łalk 23:29, 14 December 2006 (UTC)

::Done, but I still think it need some work, my english is far from perfect and it needs expanding the Johnson part. Cheers. No-Bullet (TalkContribs) 04:28, 15 December 2006 (UTC)

:Cleaned up the grammar and stuff just then. I agree about expanding the Johnson part of it - I'll see what i can do later on. ĤĶ51Łalk 19:46, 15 December 2006 (UTC)

:Expanded the lead, I still think it needs a little more work, but tell me what you think. Oh, don't you think we should move the stuff about them being ranked #4 in VH1's 100 Greatest Acts of Hard Rock and about them being the second highest earning entertainers in Australia to the "Recent events" section? ĤĶ51Łalk 20:58, 15 December 2006 (UTC)

::Yeah, you're right, the last paragraph with the sales and everything should be moved, I'm not sure what to do with the VH1 ranking, do what you think it's better :). Cheers. No-Bullet (TalkContribs) 01:48, 16 December 2006 (UTC)

:I moved the VH1 ranking further on down the lead and the second highest earners thing into "Recent events". In the Recent events section, I have also removed the Helen of Troy musical section as it is more to do with Brian Johnson and not the band as a whole (it's covered in his article) and also the section about the Family Jewels DVD - I don't see a reason why it deserves a special mention, all of the info on it is covered in its article. This ok? ĤĶ51Łalk 02:53, 16 December 2006 (UTC)

::Great! No-Bullet (TalkContribs) 16:03, 16 December 2006 (UTC)

I think its a good start; but i don't like all of it. I don't think you should call acdc a heavy metal band. the band is very offended by the term, as well am I. i don't think acdc sounds remotely like led zepplin. but besides that, its great. Captanpluto123 05:59, 21 December 2006 (UTC)

:The band isn't called a heavy metal band in the lead, they're called a pioneer of heavy metal music. For example, I wouldn't call Led Zeppelin themselves a metal band, but they sure did inspire a lot of modern heavy metal groups, as did AC/DC. ĤĶ51Łalk 14:24, 24 December 2006 (UTC)

rough and tough dvd

where in the world did you find this upcoming dvd? you need to cite this or it will be removed. Jailbreaker22 23:16, 16 December 2006 (UTC)

:Might be a bootleg - the same editor added a bootleg album which I've already deleted - I didn't notice he'd added the DVD as well. Bretonbanquet 00:29, 17 December 2006 (UTC)

i noticed the dvd was removed. looks like no one cited it. Jailbreaker22 16:49, 17 December 2006 (UTC)

I have seen the DVD in UK and it states "Made in Germany" and cites "VEO STAR ENTERTAINMENT GMBH" all of which looks OK? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 86.4.206.104 (talkcontribs){{#if:03:54, 18 December 2006| 03:54, 18 December 2006|}}.

Australian?

Well only one of the members, the rest are either English or Scottish. Please make that clearer. 82.34.1.182 15:07, 26 December 2006 (UTC)Both Malcolm and Angus are from Australia. They founded the band in Australia, therefore making the band Australian.

Copy editor in need of clarification

Is this sentence, "The track selection of this album was heavily weighted towards the more recent T.N.T. and included only two songs from their first LP, Little Lover and She's Got Balls", supposed to mean:

  • "included only two songs from their first LP, Little Lover, and She's Got Balls" OR
  • "included only two songs from their first LPs, Little Lover and She's Got Balls" ???

Random Passer-by 17:32, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

:Hi :o) the album included only two songs from their first LP (which was called High Voltage) - those two songs were Little Lover and She's Got Balls. Bretonbanquet 18:07, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

::Ah! A perfect explanation. I was wrong on both interpretations. Good thing you're here to correct me. Thank you. Random Passer-by 18:10, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

:::My pleasure - thanks for your input :o) Bretonbanquet 18:24, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

Continued Success (1977–1978) - a suggestion for discussion

I've been copy editing AC/DC and in my opinion the following sentence is half meaningless rock-journalese and detracts from the encyclopedic tone of an otherwise excellent article but I haven't removed it (so interested editors can discuss this among themselves):

  • "The previous albums gave some ground to unheard elements, like backing vocals, but still feature the AC/DC minimalism signature; loud, simple, pounding riffs and grooving backbeats.< ref name="AMG" / >" (I have no idea what the first half of this sentence means and if "elements" are "unheard" then how are they on an album ??? !!!)

:The sentence should be "some ground to previously unheard elements". Anyway, I added that to the sound sample, so remove it if you want. No-Bullet (TalkContribs) 22:08, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

::What I find slightly odd is the idea that this was the first album with backing vocals on it. Has no-one heard the previous albums? Bretonbanquet 22:13, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

:::In the Bonfire book says that, I'll quote you the paragraph: "The unleashing of Highway To Hell in 1979 however was a whole new shipping container of nitro glycerine. The savagery of the guitars on Let There Be Rock and Powerage gave some ground to previously unheard of elements like background vocals albeit, it suitably AC/DC type background vocals." No-Bullet (TalkContribs) 00:05, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

::::I've re-worded the paragraph. I hope it meets with your approval. I think this citation might need to be slightly more specific though: < ref name="Bonfire">{{cite news | first = Murray | last = Engleheart | title = AC/DC | work = Bonfire | date = 1997-11-18 | accessdate = 2000-03-23 }}. Is it from a booklet released in the box set Bonfire? Or a news article or press release about Bonfire? Random Passer-by 13:06, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

:Well, it's wrong. Powerage had backing vocals, and so did some songs on Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap, like "Love At First Feel". "Bad Boy Boogie" from Let There Be Rock etc. Highway to Hell might have polished the backing vocals up a bit, but it wasn't a new idea. Bretonbanquet 01:07, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

:Thank you all for the response, especially No-Bullet. I'd rather fix it than replace it, if fixing it's possible, because the second half of the sentence is so descriptive but, either way, it can wait until (my) tomorrow. Please keep discussing it as I'd love to hear further constructive suggestions. Random Passer-by 01:25, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

::My internet service provider was DNSed today so I've had no internet access but I will keep my word and come back to this article as soon as possible. I also left a note for the League of Copyeditors requesting a second copy editor to have a look at the article. Random Passer-by 01:17, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

:::Ok, no problem :) No-Bullet (TalkContribs) 05:55, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

Departure of Rudd (1983)

"goings-on" in the following sentence probably ought to be replaced with something more descriptive (suggestions welcome): "A music concept video with the same name, Fly on the Wall, featured the band at a bar, playing five of the album's ten songs, with various additional goings-on including an animated fly." (My apologies that I didn't sign this yesterday). Random Passer-by 01:17, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

Did the Young family move to Adelaide or Sydney in 1963?

While I've been copy editing, IP 138.130.161.241 changed "Sydney" to "Adelaide" in the History section. It's the only contribution from that IP. I'm drawing it to your attention because I don't know if it's a correction by an anonymous editor or vandalism (most of the google hits say they moved to Sydney) and I don't want it to be missed because all my minor edits push it off the article's first history page. I've reverted it for now. Random Passer-by 10:36, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

Copy edit

I'm done. I've left a note at the League of Copy editors and another editor should eventually proofread my work. In the meantime the regular editors should check to ensure I haven't accidentally altered the meaning of the article while I was copy editing. If you make further changes, or if specific changes are requested during the article's FAC, and you want me back then please feel free to leave a note on my talk page in addition to the League of Copy editors. Good luck with achieving featured article status and in the future. Random Passer-by 14:30, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

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"Rudd finished most of the drum tracks for the next album but he was replaced by Simon Wright after the band held an anonymous audition."

Not true. Rudd did ALL of Flick Of The Switch, not most.—The preceding unsigned comment was added by 69.157.229.60 (talk) 04:34, 12 January 2007

Plurality

Grammar was correct the first time.

AC/DC is a band. AC/DC are members of a band. Not AC/DC are a band.

Jerry lavoie 16:24, 13 January 2007 (UTC)

:WP:MoS matching spelling/grammar to match that rules used in the subject's country of origin. "AC/DC is" would only be correct in the United States. Since the band is Australian the gr./sp. rules "AC/DC are" is correct. Anger22 (Talk 2 22) 16:50, 13 January 2007 (UTC)

::No. It does not matter that the band is Australian. The name of the band (singular) is AC/DC. You can substitute the name with the word 'band' in any sentence, and the rules of plurality are the same. The band is old = AC/DC is old. This is k nown as a discretionary plural, as described in English_plural, as incorporated in WP:Mos by reference. In this case, it would be equally correct to use 'is' or 'are', so the original editor's format should not be changed. Jerry lavoie 20:33, 13 January 2007 (UTC)

The lead had 'are' originally, thus, seen as you've stated both are correct, it should stay. Everything else in the article must be converted to have 'band' as plural for consistancy. ĤĶ51Łalk 21:27, 13 January 2007 (UTC)

:::Just to follow up. The proper Wiki-guideline for that is WP:ENGVAR. Basically, match article language to the subjects origin. Anger22 (Talk 2 22) 21:40, 13 January 2007 (UTC)

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In other matters of English variation, it seems that "in the charts" is the UK phrase, while "on the charts" is the North American phrase. During a copyedit, I innocently converted "in" to "on", but you are welcome to revert them. –Outriggr § 04:01, 18 January 2007 (UTC)