Talk:Authority (Law & Order: Special Victims Unit)/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:56, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:56, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "April 29, 2008" per MOS:DATECOMMA.
• Add a serial comma after "Milgram experiments".
• "Milgram experiments" {{right arrow}} "Milgram experiment" (consistency with #Production)
• Add a serial comma after "Grand Central Terminal".
• "10pm" {{right arrow}} "10{{nbsp}}pm" (10{{nbsp}}pm) per MOS:TIME.
• If you add a quote to the lead, you have to recite a source per WP:QUOTE.
• Done all of the above. Removed the quote from the lead, as it was from a source long gone from the article. - JuneGloom07 Talk 03:32, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

• "voice skills" {{right arrow}} "vocal skills"
• Remove the comma after "his ankle".
• Without the names in parentheses, this section is 416 words. Try to get it down to 400 per MOS:TVPLOT.
• Done. Plot should be 400 exact now. - JuneGloom07 Talk 03:38, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

• "guest starring" {{right arrow}} "guest-starring" (both uses) {{done}}
• Add a serial comma after "Milgram experiment". {{done}}
• Also add a serial comma after Mo Rocca. {{done}}
• Various references in this section are dead. I'll point them out but an archive or replacement needs to be found for each of them. {{done}}
• Reference in the caption, which is also used in prose, is dead. {{done}}
• The first reference in this section is dead. {{done}}
• "and who faces serious repercussions" is not part of [https://www.today.com/id/wbna23698961#.U-_LdcVdWSo the quote].
• Changed.
• The current-live reference after "like to appear on the show" doesn't show any text.
• Not quite sure what to do here. I can try contacting the site to get a fix. - JuneGloom07 Talk 03:56, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
• In the reference after Homicide: Life on the Street, I don't think the use of "|quote=" is necessary since it's recited later on. {{done}}
• Reference after "event" is also dead. {{done}}
• Why is there a summary of the episode in this section? I would remove it. {{done}}
• The reference after "pillow fight" (from Just Jared) is not reliable per Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard/Archive 266#Just Jared.
• I had this particular source whitelisted at WT:WHITELIST and thus believe it can be used in the article. - JuneGloom07 Talk 03:56, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
• With the archive not showing any content and the link not working anymore, the reference after "appeared as himself" is dead.
• Long story short, I saved all the HighBeam articles offline and just archived this one using dropbox and archive.is. - JuneGloom07 Talk 18:15, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

• Try lowering the use of quotes in this section with the help of WP:RECEPTION. {{done}}
• Recite sources at the end of each quote per WP:QUOTE. {{done}}
• The reference from The Radio Times is dead.
• Updated.
• Same issues for the references after "by Rook", "grand exit", and "unsung roles". {{done}}

• Archive all archivable references (either manually or with [https://iabot.toolforge.org/index.php?page=runbotsingle this tool]). Keep in mind that references from The Futon Critic can only be archived with [https://archive.today/ archive.today].
• Archived them manually, including FC. Also updated some urls. - JuneGloom07 Talk 03:07, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
• Instead of "(subscription required)", mark that reference with "|url-access=subscription". {{done}}
• Most of my comments on references are in #Production above.
• Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited". {{done}}

:While I am grateful for the pass (and review), it was a bit premature. I'm working on finishing the last of the points raised now. - JuneGloom07 Talk 18:02, 1 April 2021 (UTC)