Talk:Brian Sterling-Vete

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This reads like self-authored publicity puff

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Hi--I am a newbie, so I will try to get the links fixed. I used some examples and read a lot on citation links, but I obviously didn't get them right. We will do so.

That said, I'm very confused. I see an afd request on the page. One place, it shows that in one day (before I could comment), it was deleted, and in another, shows it is to be kept but needs editing.

Can someone clarify for me what I need to do to keep this article up and improve my links, references, etc.? I truly believe we have met all the requirements for notability, and there is more I could add for citations and references if I have a chance to do so.

I would very much appreciate some guidance on this!

Thanks

Lkcarnes (talk) 18:09, 24 March 2010 (UTC)

Promotional vehicle

This page reads as a promo for its subject. Suggest radical trimming down to info supported by third-parties. The Interior (Talk) 18:37, 21 March 2011 (UTC)

I edited the page to address the issues raised--self promotion and deleted some info that can't be verified online by third parties.

I do have question--not everything has internet-available validation, but the information is nonetheless true.

I left information in that is true and valid that rounds out the background and accomplishments.

I request validation and would like to get the article back to its original form, without the warnings.

If there is more that needs to be done, I am happy to address changes that make sense.

Lkcarnes (talk) 12:42, 12 May 2011 (UTC)

I see the nominator is out until July and nobody has joined in on this conversation in almost two months.

I am removing the notifications for now, and if the nominator wants to raise this conversation again

upon return, I will be happy to work with them to address any remaining issues, if any.

Lkcarnes (talk) 14:14, 13 May 2011 (UTC)