Talk:Bryan Shader

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:: Bryan Shader is a professor of mathematics at the University of Wyoming. He received his Ph.D. from University of

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That doesn't look promising. It's telling us biographical details like where he got his Ph.D. before telling us specifically what he is noted for. That shouldn't happen. If there were something later in the article that says what he's notable for, I'd simply have rearranged it. But that doesn't seem to be there. Michael Hardy (talk) 19:35, 8 September 2010 (UTC)