Talk:Cedar Fire/GA2
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GA Review
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I am giving this article a GA Review.
Reviewer: Shearonink (talk · contribs) 06:38, 28 December 2016 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it well written?
- :A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct: {{GAList/check|yes}}
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- :B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation: {{GAList/check|yes}}
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- Is it verifiable with no original research?
- :A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline: {{GAList/check|yes}}
- :: referencing issues resolved. Shearonink (talk) 19:07, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
- :B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines: {{GAList/check|yes}}
- ::*Ref # 18 is problematic -please check that it is the most current URL.
- ::*Ref #31 is dead.
- ::*Ref #20 is dead.
- ::{{ping|Shearonink}} {{Done}} --Zackmann08 (Talk to me/What I been doing) 18:53, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
- :::{{ping|Zackmann08}} Many thanks for taking care of those. This week, am slightly swamped with other commitments but I will get back to the article & its Review as soon as I can. Just don't want anyone to think I had forgotten about it. Shearonink (talk) 19:07, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
- :C. It contains no original research: {{GAList/check|yes}}
- :: With the fixing of the referencing issues this issue is resolved. Shearonink (talk) 19:07, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
- :D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism: {{GAList/check|yes}}
- :: Ran copyvio tool - no problems found.
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- :A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic: {{GAList/check|yes}}
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- :B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style): {{GAList/check|yes}}
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- Is it neutral?
- :It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each: {{GAList/check|yes}}
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- Is it stable?
- : It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute: {{GAList/check|yes}}
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- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- :A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content: {{GAList/check|yes}}
- :: :File:Wind shifts.jpg is lacking source & author information.
- ::{{ping|Shearonink}} {{Done}} --Zackmann08 (Talk to me/What I been doing) 18:56, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
- :::Thanks. Shearonink (talk) 19:07, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
- :B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions: {{GAList/check|yes}}
- ::That photo of the fire crossing the highway...((shivers)).
- :::And kudos to whoever uploaded it and used it in the article. Shearonink (talk) 19:07, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
- Overall:
- :Pass or Fail: {{GAList/check|pass}}
- ::Any further comments on other possible issues and the article's status are on hold for a few days due to other commitments and also pending a few more readthroughs. Shearonink (talk) 19:07, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
- :Comment. This article was previously nominated for GA status: Talk:Cedar Fire (2003)/GA1. Its structure, wording, citation issues have all been improved and cleared-up since then. I particularly commend {{u|Zackmann08}} for their writing concerning the aftermath of the fire and the various controversies as well as fixing all the various referencing issues. I am certain there are some improvements that could be made but at this time I cannot think of any. Nicely-done. Shearonink (talk) 16:44, 5 January 2017 (UTC)
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