Talk:Coriolanus Snow/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 18:34, 14 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I will review this article within the next week. -Riley1012 (talk) 18:34, 14 March 2024 (UTC)
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| Criteria: 1a. prose ({{GAList/check| y}}) 1b. MoS ({{GAList/check| y}}) 2a. ref layout ({{GAList/check| y}}) 2b. cites WP:RS ({{GAList/check| y}}) 2c. no WP:OR ({{GAList/check| y}}) 2d. no WP:CV ({{GAList/check| y}}) |
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1. Well-written
- {{!xt|Snow is influenced by Dr. Gaul's view of state control as necessity to prevent disorder.}} Should be "as a necessity"
- {{!xt|Snow reunites with Lucy Gray and they start a relationship...}} Add a comma before "and"
- {{!xt|He pursues her through the woods and she leaves a snake to attack him.}} Add a comma before "and"
- {{!xt|In Mockingjay, Snow directs the Capitol's military campaign to quash revolution in the Districts...}} Add "the" before "revolution"
- {{!xt|Instead she shoots rebellion leader Alma Coin...}} Add a comma after "Instead"
- {{!xt|He is a fascist and a totalitarian dictator who aims to crush revolution.}} Add "the" before "revolution" since we are discussing the specific revolution from the book/series.
- {{!xt|In his view, however, Lucy Gray betrays him and he becomes a colder character.}} Add a comma before "and"
- {{!xt|Snow believes Peeta loves Katniss but she does not reciprocate;...}} Add a comma before "but"
- {{!xt|Pavia was unclear which character the audience were supposed to support...}} Should be "was" instead of "were"
- {{!xt|Miller found his perspective tiring in the middle of the book, but praised...}} Remove the comma after "book" (or add "she" after "but")
- {{!xt|...Mockingjay – Part 2 neglects other characters to focus on rivalry between Katniss and Snow...}} Add "the" before "rivalry"
- All done, with "that"s added in {{tq|Snow believes that Peeta loves Katniss, but that she does not reciprocate}} (it's not "Snow believes Peeta loves Katniss; in reality, Katniss does not reciprocate"). — Bilorv (talk) 18:03, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
2. Verifiable
Plot summaries don't require citations per WP:PLOTSOURCE. The sources used are reliable.
- [https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=2023+Pasadena%E2%80%93Deer+Park+tornado&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 Earwig's Copyvio] check similarities just for repeating the title of the books/movies and the quote "It's the things we love most that destroy us" - this is not a cause for concern. But the top similar link is [https://time.com/6336929/hunger-games-prequel-snow-katniss/ reference 13], and there are a couple of identical phrases that should be reworded to avoid copyright violations.
:* "This left him with bloody sores in his mouth" and "Grandma'am grows roses on the roof of their penthouse" should be reworded.
:**Yep, done. — Bilorv (talk) 18:03, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
- Spot check:
:* No issues: 1, 5, 7 (per WP:RSPYT, YouTube videos from verified channels of reliable sources can be used), 8, 11, 14, 17, 20, 21, 24, 26, 28, 30, 35, 41, 43
3. Broad
- The Hunger Games trilogy section notes notable differences between the books and films. Are there any notable differences in the movie adaptation of The Ballad of Songbirds and Snakes?
- Nothing that critics commented on. There's a huge difference in The Hunger Games (for various reasons covered in the article) whereas Ballad is a very direct adaptation. The main beats covered in "Character history" are the same. — Bilorv (talk) 18:03, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
4. Neutral
The article is neutral in its coverage of the character.
5. Stable
This article is stable day-to-day.
6. Illustrated
The images in the article qualify for fair use and have relevant captions. Wish there was a higher-quality image for Blythe, but there isn't one in the Commons yet.
:{{Ping|Riley1012}} Thanks for the review! I think I've responded to all the points above—let me know if there's anything more to be done. — Bilorv (talk) 18:03, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
:: {{ping|Bilorv}} Everything looks good now. I will pass, well done! -Riley1012 (talk) 21:11, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
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