Talk:French destroyer Pistolet/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 17:19, 9 July 2023 (UTC)

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Will take a look shortly. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 17:19, 9 July 2023 (UTC)

=Prelim=

=Lede and infobox=

  • "an Arquebuse-class"
  • Launch date differs wildly between lede, infobox, and main text
  • Date of being struck differs between infobox and main text
  • The fact the boilers are water-tube are not mentioned in main text
  • Du Temple Guyot boilers are a type of water-tube boilers--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:31, 10 July 2023 (UTC)

=Design and description=

=Service history=

  • Link sea trials
  • Already linked in the description section.
  • Do we really need to know the French translation of "commissioned"?
  • If you're redlinking Northern Squadron in the lede you should probably do so in the main text too
  • Considering the Northern Squadron has no article, could you describe what/where this actually was?
  • Do we not know what the ship was doing between 1904 and 1911 at all?
  • There's nothing in my sources covering that other than the 1905 assignment.
  • "on 27 October 1914" no need to repeat the year
  • "as she was moored inboard of Fronde."...and thus could not fire her guns? or similar explanation
  • Not totally necessary, but I'm surprised you don't mention the fate of sister ship Mousquet in the same engagement

=References=

  • References look OK. AGF for print sources.

{{ping|Sturmvogel 66}} Hi, that's all I have for now. Will await your response. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 19:39, 9 July 2023 (UTC)

  • Thanks for the review. See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:16, 10 July 2023 (UTC)

::{{ping|Sturmvogel 66}} Passing this as satisfying the GA criteria. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 17:29, 11 July 2023 (UTC)

:::...and {{ping|Parsecboy}} My apologies for not pinging you sooner! Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 17:32, 11 July 2023 (UTC)