Talk:George H. W. Bush 1992 presidential campaign

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Focus of introduction

Hey everyone, I was planning on beginning to edit this article, especially the introduction, to follow the style and substance of more recent campaign articles like the Donald Trump 2020 presidential campaign or the Hillary Clinton 2016 presidential campaign articles. The introduction in both of these articles focuses solely on the campaign. But the second paragraph in this article is a biography of Bush and the third paragraph focuses on his presidency, not his campaign (It also has weasel words like 'hate'). I plan on changing these paragraphs. Appreciate any feedback. Thanks Pefrectionist (talk) 00:46, 22 May 2021 (UTC)

:@Pefrectionist Hi, and thanks for your comments. I decided to make the layout of this article somewhat similar to those of some FA related to the topic. Some of them are William Jennings Bryan 1896 presidential campaign, William McKinley 1896 presidential campaign and Ross Perot 1992 presidential campaign.

:All three pages have biography in background and. I requested a user to suggest me some points (which can be seen at User talk:William S. Saturn#Regarding_an_article) and he said that the article has much background information, which is fine but other sections are less detailed. I tried to improve many mentioned points. I appreciate your comments, If you have any other information or concerns about the article, I suggest putting at Peer review page. It would be fine if other sections are made more detailed or background information in reduced.

:Thanks

:Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 01:35, 22 May 2021 (UTC)