Talk:Joe "Tiger" Patrick II

• A few phrases, not many, have a bit of a non-neutral point of view. (It happens to match my POV, but it's still a POV.) This should be easily cleaned up via normal editing.
• The link to Operation New Dawn points to a disambiguation page, and should instead point to one of the things that page references.
• I personally feel that the tapestry details section should be rewritten as prose, but that's a bit of a subjective editorial decision

::Joe Decker Thank you for your review, and accepting this article. It has been a learning experience and I am thrilled to be helping to improve wikipedia. I have corrected the Operation New Dawn disambiguation issue, linked to this article from another, and removed the orphan tag. I am in search of the phrases that have a "POV", and need to research what "written in prose" means. I will strive to clean this article to the best of my ability. Once again thank you for your review.TattØØdẄaitre§ lĖTŝ tÅLĶ'' 16:06, 18 July 2013 (UTC)

:::TattØØdẄaitre§By "written in prose," Joe Decker means that he thinks it might look better in paragraph format rather than bullet points. I agree that the POV still needs a bit of work (it sounds very pro-Joe - and I can hardly blame you, he seems like a good guy - we just need to be careful with how we sound), but this is doable. Congratulations! --Jackson Peebles (talk) 04:41, 25 July 2013 (UTC)

::::Oh gosh thank you, I have really been working on the POV issue and am wondering if you could point out some exact phrases that need work? That would help me a lot, not just for this article but for future ref. Nice to have you back Jackson Peebles and hope you enjoyed your vaca. TattØØdẄaitre§ lĖTŝ tÅLĶ'' 15:23, 25 July 2013 (UTC)

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