Talk:Juuse Saros/GA1
GA Review
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| result = Passed. Riley1012 (talk) 23:53, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
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Nominator: {{User|HickoryOughtShirt?4}}
Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 01:23, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I will complete this review by the end of this week. -Riley1012 (talk) 01:23, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
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1. Well-written
- Consider breaking up the Becoming the starter (2018–present) even further because it is currently quite long. Maybe 2021-present can be another subsection with a title like Starter (2021-present)
- {{re|Riley1012}} do you think I should just break it up by year? I have seen that done before (see Mitch Marner). HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 12:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
- :{{re|HickoryOughtShirt?4}} That works for me. Let me know when this is done, and I'll pass the article. -Riley1012 (talk) 21:27, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
- :{{re|Riley1012}} done! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 23:14, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
- Per MOS:ALLCAPS, could the references with all-caps titles (6, 14, 49, and 52) be changed? {{done}}
- {{!xt|Saros played his entire youth career and first three professional seasons with hometown club...}} Add "his" before "hometown" {{done}}
- {{!xt|He finished his rookie season with a 17–10–2 record, a 2.62 goals against average, a .915 save percentage.}} Add "and" before "a .915 save percentage" {{done}}
- {{!xt|He began the season as the steadfast backup to Rinne but they transitioned into an even split rather than starter/backup roles as the season continued.}} Add a comma after "Rinne" {{done}}
- {{!xt|Saros finished in fourth place with two first place votes, two second place votes, and eight third place votes.}} Add a hyphen for first/second/third-place votes. {{done}}
2. Verifiable
[https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Juuse+Saros&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 Earwig's Copyvio] check passed. Sources are all reliable.
- Ref 39 needs |publisher=National Hockey League in the citation template {{done}}
- There should be consistency in the references on whether it's Sportsnet.ca or Sportsnet {{done}}
- Are there sources for the Career Statistics section?
- {{re|Riley1012}} At the bottom of the article in external sources it says {{tq|Biographical information and career statistics from....}} HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 12:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
- Spot check:
:* No issues: 1, 3, 6, 10, 15, 16, 21, 26, 35, 43, 50, 60, 68, 78, 81, 91, 100, 107
3. Broad
- The 2016 IIHF World Championship should be discussed in the body since it's mentioned in the lead {{done}}
- Is there anything else of note that could be added to the Personal life section? I noticed in ref. 3 that he has an older brother that could be mentioned. {{done}}
4. Neutral
The article is neutral.
5. Stable
This article is stable day-to-day.
6. Illustrated
The images in the article are free and have relevant captions.
{{ping|HickoryOughtShirt?4}} Nice article, just a few things that need to be addressed. -Riley1012 (talk) 21:57, 26 March 2024 (UTC)
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