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Talk:K'Andre Miller/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 02:41, 30 January 2022 (UTC)

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#It is reasonably well written.

  1. :a (prose, spelling, and grammar): {{GAList/check
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b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}
  • It is factually accurate and verifiable.
  • :a (references): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|y}}
    c (OR): {{GAList/check|y}}
    d (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check|y}}
  • It is broad in its coverage.
  • :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (focused): {{GAList/check|y}}
  • It follows the neutral point of view policy.
  • :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
  • It is stable.
  • :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
  • It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
  • :a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|}}

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    =Copy changes=

    ==Lead==

    • Change "whom" to "which"
    • Done.

    ==Early life==

    • Does (MLB) need to be included if it is not to be mentioned again in the page? The other acronym recitations make sense, as they are repeated later.
    • It does not, good catch.

    ==Playing career==

    • Remove comma after "team rules"
    • Done and moved ref to the end of the sentence.
    • Remove comma after "7 seconds of ice time per game"
    • Done.

    ==International play==

    • "Miller has represented" — likely should be past tense
    • Done.

    ==Personal life==

    • Remove comma after "throughout his hockey career"
    • Done.

    ==Awards and honours==

    • It would be more appropriate in this case to use American English for the header.
    • Whoops, you're right!

    =Other items=

    • Earwig catches organization names and recitations of stats, e.g. {{tq|three goals and 14 assists for 17 points}}. Not a major issue.
    • The lone image on the page is freely licensed, though it is missing a {{para|alt}} tag.
    • Only part of the FA criteria, but added anyway. I am admittedly not great at alt text.
    • References are archived.
    • No BLP violations.

    =Summary=

    {{ping|GhostRiver}} Just needs a few copy changes, the type that fresh eyes after nearly two months can catch. Putting on hold; ping when revised. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:54, 30 January 2022 (UTC)

    :{{u|Sammi Brie}} Changes addressed, thank you! — GhostRiver 03:14, 30 January 2022 (UTC)