Talk:Space 220 Restaurant

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How does this sound like an advertisement? I even looked at other articles like splash mountain to make sure i could say some stuff like guest Kaleeb18 (talk) 22:01, 6 October 2021 (UTC)Kaleeb18

: {{ping|Kaleeb18}} As was mentioned in The Teahouse, the menu offerings are probably the biggest issue. I know you worked really hard on that, but my recommendation would be to change the section header to "Food", and keep only the first paragraph, or expand on that paragraph but without prices and unnecessary puff. Does that help? Pyrrho the Skeptic (talk) 18:03, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

References

All of the references are Disney or blogs. David notMD (talk) 14:25, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

:[https://www.travelandleisure.com/trip-ideas/disney-vacations/space-220-restaurant Here] is coverage in a moderately reliable source, although the coverage was almost certainly generated by Disney's PR people. Cullen³²⁸ Let's discuss it 17:59, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

::[https://www.travelweekly.com/Blogs/Dispatch/Review-Epcot-Space-220-restaurant Here] is a better, less promotional source. Cullen³²⁸ Let's discuss it 18:06, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

The problem is I think most of the stuff about Disney is going to be blogs or just disney websites unless you scroll through a bunch of websites and find a good website like you did. Still trying to learn so I don’t make these type of mistakes again Kaleeb18 (talk) 00:32, 10 October 2021 (UTC)Kaleeb18

Another source

[https://news.google.com/articles/CAIiEKNgPNbrmTXtEdVC6iq31VgqGQgEKhAIACoHCAow9qOFCzDSvIIDMPm4xAY?hl=en-US&gl=US&ceid=US%3Aen This source] may be useful. Cullen³²⁸ Let's discuss it 04:40, 3 November 2021 (UTC)