Talk:St. Elmo (secret society)/Archive 1

The "History" section of this article is incoherent.

The sentence

"Like the other Sheffield Societies, the building was once populated by admitted members from the sophomore, junior, and senior classes, who maintained separate residential quarters within the tomb."

contains the first reference to "the building" and indeed the first occurrence in the article of the word "building".

At least part of the following section should precede this sentence, or the content of the "History" section should be revised to relegate references to "the building" to the following section.

Dagme (talk) 19:36, 5 February 2011 (UTC)

:Wikipedia encourages you to Be bold and make these changes yourself! Place Clichy (talk) 16:23, 7 February 2011 (UTC)

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Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just added archive links to {{plural:3|one external link|3 external links}} on St. Elmo (secret society). Please take a moment to review [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?diff=prev&oldid=701905575 my edit]. If necessary, add {{tlx|cbignore}} after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add {{tlx|nobots|deny{{=}}InternetArchiveBot}} to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:

• Added archive https://web.archive.org/20080723021213/http://www.asm-hartford.org:80/rockwelld.htm to http://www.asm-hartford.org/rockwelld.htm
• Added archive https://web.archive.org/20071022012341/http://www.aliciapatterson.org/APF001974/Coombs/Coombs02/Coombs02.html to http://www.aliciapatterson.org/APF001974/Coombs/Coombs02/Coombs02.html
• Added archive https://web.archive.org/20090521182357/http://www.yalealumnimagazine.com:80/yotw/index.html to http://www.yalealumnimagazine.com/yotw/index.html

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