Talk:Terry Shintani
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This article is unencyclopedic in its gushing praise for the subject. It needs editing to an encyclopedic tone. Edison (talk) 01:15, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
:Editedit to more neutral tone. There are lots of references to show notability and to improve the article. See Google Books, with 79 hits : [http://books.google.com/books?lr=&as_brr=0&q=%22Terry+Shintani%22&btnG=Search+Books] and Google News Archive, with 75 hits:[http://news.google.com/archivesearch?pz=1&ned=us&hl=en&q=%22Terry+Shintani%22&cf=all]. Edison (talk) 03:03, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
Content should be edited maintaining the neutral tone. More references must be added and verify.