Template:Did you know nominations/Akshata Murty

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 21:43, 30 December 2022 (UTC)

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... that Akshata Murty is the wife of British Prime Minister Rishi Sunak? Source: https://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/2020/02/15/rishi-sunaks-wife-may-hold-clue-budget/ for the wife part.
Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Jemma Mitchell case
Comment: wanted to make a hook about Murty being richer than queen Elizabeth but that fact isn't in the article so...

Improved to Good Article status by {{user0|CT55555}}. Nominated by {{user0|Onegreatjoke}} at 23:55, 19 December 2022 (UTC).

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|comments = {{Ping|Onegreatjoke}} Everything seems okay except for the hook. It doesn't seem particularly interesting or captivating. Could you come up with a few others instead?

|sign = Unlimitedlead (talk) 23:43, 20 December 2022 (UTC)

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:{{Ping|Unlimitedlead}} How about alt1 "... that Akshata Murty was richer than Queen Elizabeth II?" Onegreatjoke (talk) 00:56, 21 December 2022 (UTC)

::Sounds great, but there would need to be a citation for that, and I think it should be in the article as well. Please let me know when both have been done. Thanks, Unlimitedlead (talk) 02:05, 21 December 2022 (UTC)

:::{{ping|Unlimitedlead}} I've placed it in the article with a citation in the career and investments section. Onegreatjoke (talk) 16:13, 21 December 2022 (UTC)

::::16px Great. Approving this nomination. Unlimitedlead (talk) 16:14, 21 December 2022 (UTC)

::::: {{yo|Unlimitedlead|Onegreatjoke}} 16px 16px I'd like to see a bit more context in the hook, and possibly use a living example to avoid the awkward use of "was". How about:

::::* ALT2: ... that Akshata Murty, wife of British Prime Minister Rishi Sunak, is richer than King Charles III?

::::: I've also added an image. Thanks! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 09:46, 30 December 2022 (UTC)

::::::{{ping|theleekycauldron}} {{ping|Onegreatjoke}} Looks fine to me. Unlimitedlead (talk) 14:22, 30 December 2022 (UTC)

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