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The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 17:55, 16 June 2024 (UTC)

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... that HIV has its origins in the Fall, according to one journal? Source: [https://www.theguardian.com/science/blog/2008/jan/27/godsjournal]
Reviewed: Template:Did_you_know_nominations/George_Kunkel_(theatre_manager)
Comment: If preferred, the 'according to the journal' clause can be in the beginning.

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Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 22:48, 22 May 2024 (UTC).

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|comments = LGTM, tho I don't love the hook. Given that this is Psuedoscience territory, it might be best to err on the side of being a bit verbose.

How about ALT 1: ... that according to one creationist journal, HIV has its origins in the Fall?

Thoughts {{u|Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d}}?

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:{{u|Sohom Datta}}, Alt1 looks good to me! Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 23:37, 4 June 2024 (UTC)

::16px Approved, per above. Sohom (talk) 00:36, 5 June 2024 (UTC)

::: Can I offer an even more direct alternative hook? And {{u|Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d}}, if you're not feeling this, you can strike it. Rjjⁱⁱⁱ (talk) 19:16, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

ALT2: ... that the inaugural article of one creationist journal claims that HIV goes back to the biblical Fall?

:I prefer the Alt1 hook still. Alt2 just seems a bit wordy. Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 19:54, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

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