Template:Did you know nominations/Caroline Pafford Miller
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:43, 20 February 2020 (UTC)
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... that after Caroline Pafford Miller published her first novel, she received a letter from Margaret Mitchell saying it was her "favorite book"?Source: {{citeweb|url=https://www.newspapers.com/image/?clipping_id=41553915&fcfToken=eyJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiIsInR5cCI6IkpXVCJ9.eyJmcmVlLXZpZXctaWQiOjIwMTc0NDA0MSwiaWF0IjoxNTgxODAzMzM1LCJleHAiOjE1ODE4ODk3MzV9.LMUqk91HmM5tiAskrA50eP2eelvumKuSTdX6Rsh1qTg|title=Georgia's First Pulitzer Prize Winner for Fiction Dies|publisher=Asheville Citizen-Times|date=July 14, 1992|accessdate=February 15, 2020}}- ALT1:
... that Caroline Pafford Miller wrote her Pulitzer Prize winning novel based on stories and folklore she heard while traveling the backwoods of Georgia?Source: {{citeweb|url=https://www.georgiaencyclopedia.org/articles/arts-culture/caroline-miller-1903-1992|title=Caroline Miller (1903-1992)|publisher=New Georgia Encyclopedia|author= Carey O. Shellman|date=October 5, 2019|accessdate=February 15, 2020}}
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5x expanded by Gulbenk (talk). Self-nominated at 22:51, 15 February 2020 (UTC).
:* 16px 5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I added an infobox, did some editing and wikifying, and also began expanding the lead. I think you should add something more about her to the lead so it doesn't sound like an introduction to Margaret Mitchell. I also added "citation needed" tags to text that needs sourcing. The image in the article is freely-licensed, but it does not show up at all at thumbnail size, so I suggest running the hook alone. ALT0 is the best IMO, but it is inaccurate: she received this letter after winning the Pulitzer Prize for Fiction. Please list new hook suggestions at the bottom of this post. Thank you, Yoninah (talk) 00:00, 16 February 2020 (UTC)
::*Nominator has 4 DYK credits, so this is the last freebie before a QPQ is needed. Yoninah (talk) 00:03, 16 February 2020 (UTC)
Tag concerns have been addressed (both referenced, and one reworded) and new hook proposed below. Will expand lead. Gulbenk (talk) 04:54, 16 February 2020 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that after Caroline Pafford Miller won the Pulitzer Prize for her first novel, she received a letter from Margaret Mitchell saying it was her "favorite book"? Source: {{citeweb|url=https://www.newspapers.com/image/?clipping_id=41553915&fcfToken=eyJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiIsInR5cCI6IkpXVCJ9.eyJmcmVlLXZpZXctaWQiOjIwMTc0NDA0MSwiaWF0IjoxNTgxODAzMzM1LCJleHAiOjE1ODE4ODk3MzV9.LMUqk91HmM5tiAskrA50eP2eelvumKuSTdX6Rsh1qTg|title=Georgia's First Pulitzer Prize Winner for Fiction Dies|publisher=Asheville Citizen-Times|date=July 14, 1992|accessdate=February 15, 2020}}
:*16px Thank you. I added some links to the hook. ALT2 verified and cited inline. Rest of review above. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 21:57, 16 February 2020 (UTC)
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