Template:Did you know nominations/Raphael Demos

Category:Passed DYK nominations from October 2016

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:01, 3 December 2016 (UTC)

==Raphael Demos==

... that Raphael Demos taught Martin Luther King Jr. the philosophy of Plato and gave him an A for his work?
Alt1 ... that Raphael Demos worked as a janitor at Harvard University to pay his tuition and eventually became a professor of philosophy there?

:* Reviewed: Ratification of the United States Constitution by Rhode Island

Created by Philafrenzy (talk). Self-nominated at 11:15, 28 October 2016 (UTC).

16px No issues found with article, ready for human review.

✓ This article is new and was created on 09:56, 28 October 2016 (UTC)

✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 2605 characters

✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation

✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags

? A copyright violation is suspected by an automated tool, with 26.5% confidence. ([https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Raphael+Demos&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=1 confirm])

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16px Some overall issues detected

✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 100 characters

✗ Philafrenzy has more than 5 DYK credits. A QPQ review is required for this nomination.

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:* (AWAITING QPQ). Wouldn't a better hook include Demos not being sure if he'd taught King, & writing to ask? Too many short paras in career section. Earwig says 26.5% Violation unlikely - only standard jobs titles & basic phrases picked up. New enough, long enough, neutral. Hook checks out, though personally I'd expand on the letter in the text. One of the quibbling alligators at WP:ERRORS or the many other places they lurk may complain that we only have King's word for it he got an "A" ....Johnbod (talk) 03:02, 1 November 2016 (UTC)

::*Thanks, I found more sources after nominating it, hence the bare URLs etc, which I will integrate shortly. Philafrenzy (talk) 09:51, 1 November 2016 (UTC)

:*Just integrated all the new material. Good early life story of struggle. Revised and expanded the letter para. Alt added. QPQ next. Philafrenzy (talk) 00:01, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

:::QPQ done. Philafrenzy (talk) 12:00, 24 November 2016 (UTC)

::::Pinging Johnbod to continue review now that the QPQ has been submitted. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:44, 3 December 2016 (UTC)

16px GTG, finally. But please don't let's take 6 weeks to do a QPQ in future. Johnbod (talk) 15:20, 3 December 2016 (UTC)