User:Antidiskriminator/Sandbox/Old sandbox/Pavle Đurišić

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1. Factually incorrect data:
2. Death place - The article presented Lijevce polje as death place [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Death_place link] {{done}}
3. Year of birth [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Year_of_birth link] Both 1907 and 1909 are presented. {{done}}
4. Albania, not Slovenia: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87/Archive_2#To_Slovenia_or_to_Greece.3F Đurišić had wanted to withdraw through Albania to Greece, not to Slovenia, like article explains.] {{done}}
5. Number of refugees expelled from other parts of Yugoslava is underestimated 5 times: [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87/Archive_2#Refugees_from_Bosnia_and_Herzegovina_fleeing_from_ustasha_terror the text of the article mentions only 5,000 refugees out of 25,000 who were from Kosovo and Vojvodina] {{done}}
6. Date when Đurišić became Chetnik (October instead of December): [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#When_.C4.90uri.C5.A1i.C4.87_became_a_Chetnik.3F link] {{done}}
7. Chetnik movement in Montenegro was under Đurišić's command - [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Commands_held_.2B_ranks link] The text of the article does not say that Chetnik movement in Montenegro was under Đurišić's command {{done}}
8. Unclear:
9. Djurisic's year of birth is unclear. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Year_of_birth link] Both 1907 and 1909 are presented. {{not done}}
10. What is his death place? - Multiple sources are presented that it is Jasenovac. ([https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87/Archive_4#Death_place link]) {{not done}}
11. What happened to Djurisic's followers? - No mention that Partisans killed Djurisic's followers. No explanation why. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Serbia/Assessment/Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#1.29_Lede_improvement.2C_2.29_parents_3.29_.C4.90uri.C5.A1i.C4.87.27s_role_in_uprising_4.29_fate_of_his_followers_5.29_memorial_image Link to discussion] {{done}}
12. Why Partisans committed atrocities in Kolasin? - Lack of context of Partisan's atrocities in Kolasin, described only in the half of the sentence. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Serbia/Assessment/Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Missing_context_of_the_relation_between_Djurisic_and_partisans Link to discussion.] {{done}}
13. What was the reason for grievances of Montenegrins against Italian forces? - No appropriate explanation of major grievances of Montenegrins against Italians.[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87/Archive_2#Refugees_from_Bosnia_and_Herzegovina_fleeing_from_ustasha_terror Link to discussion.] {{done}}
14. Memorial controversy: In May 2002, plans were prepared for a "Montenegrin Ravna Gora" memorial complex to be located near Berane. There are two three sentences which explain why this memorial should not be constructed. Those two references are referenced with website sources. Still, there is no explanation why this memorial should be constructed. {{not done}}
15. Djurisic's allegiance to communists: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Was_.C4.90uri.C5.A1i.C4.87_subordinated_to_the_communists Were Đurišić and his forces subordinated to the communists during the Uprising]? {{not done}}
16. Timeline of Uprising in Montenegro and Italian occupation is wrong - The chronology of the sections is wrong in case of section about uprising and Italian occupation.[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#First_uprising_against_Italians_-_then_Itallian_occupation_of_Montenegro Link to discussion.] {{Done}}
17. No mention that Muslim and Albanian forces helped Italian forces to execute hundreds of Montenegrins and to intern 10,000—20,000 - Instead to present this information which is very important for the context of the events, the article justified actions of irregulars' with their memory on 1912-13 Montenegrin occupation of parts of Ottoman Empire (almost thirty years before this events). ([http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Muslim_and_Albanian_irregulars Link to discussion] {{Done}}
18. Unclear political aims of Nationalist Committee of Montenegro - The article does not explain the only political aim of this committee (To crush communism and to safeguard law and order and the well being of the Montenegrin population), which is very important for the context of the events. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#To_crush_communism_and_to_safeguard_law_and_order_and_the_well_being_of_the_Montenegrin_population Link to discussion.] {{done}}
19. Incorrect chronology of German occupation - [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#First_uprising_against_Italians_-_then_Itallian_occupation_of_Montenegro The chronology of the sections is wrong in case of section about German occupation 1943—1944.] {{done}}
20. three paragraphs in the wrong section - [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Subsection Subsection] {{done}}
21. Ustaše manipulation of the Muslims in the Sandžak? - [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Usta.C5.A1e_manipulation_of_the_Muslims_in_the_Sand.C5.BEak.3F link] No explanation why would "Ustaše manipulation of the Muslims in the Sandžak" made "Đurišić and his Chetniks impatient to continue with the uprising by turning on the Muslims and Albanians in the region". {{not done}}
22. Why did he wait and why Foča, Pljevlja and Čajniče? - DM allegedly ordered Đurišić in December 1941 to clean "the Muslim population from Sandžak and the Muslim and Croat populations from Bosnia and Herzegovina". The article says that in early 1943 Đurišić organized a "cleansing actions" that represented partial achievement by Đurišić of Mihailović's directive of 20 December 1941 to clear the Sandžak of Muslims. There are many Muslims living in nearby region around Đurišić headquarter. It is unclear why did he wait for more than a year, and then attacked Muslims not in his nearby region, but in Foča and Čajniče, which are far away.

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1. MOS:LEAD:
2. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Serbia/Assessment/Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#1.29_Lede_improvement.2C_2.29_parents_3.29_.C4.90uri.C5.A1i.C4.87.27s_role_in_uprising_4.29_fate_of_his_followers_5.29_memorial_image Only WWII: Lede speaks only about his life during WWII.] {{done}}
3. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Serbia/Assessment/Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#1.29_Lede_improvement.2C_2.29_parents_3.29_.C4.90uri.C5.A1i.C4.87.27s_role_in_uprising_4.29_fate_of_his_followers_5.29_memorial_image Only 1942-45: When lede speaks only about his life during WWII, it starts with 1942. What about 1941?] {{done}}
4. Wrong section of the commemoration related text: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#First_uprising_against_Italians_-_then_Itallian_occupation_of_Montenegro Text about after WWII commemoration events within WWII aftermath subsection] {{done}}
5. Template:Infobox military person is not followed {{not done}}

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1. WP:Reliable source:
2. Unreliable source from 1912: The opposition communist newspapers Radničke Novine published in 1912 and quoted in 1914 were used to support assertions about 1941 events? {{done}}
3. Philip Cohen's 'Serbia's Secret War: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Philip_Cohen.27s_.27Serbia.27s_Secret_War Philip Cohen's 'Serbia's Secret War - There was no consensus about the reliability of this work at first RSN discussion. The second RSN discussion resulted without unanimous decision]
4. Wikipedia:Verifiability: Source misinterpretation:
5. The source used to support date of Djuricic's death is probably misintertpreted [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Death_date link] {{Done}}
6. Refugees from Bosnia and Herzegovina fleeing from ustasha terror were overlooked in the source {{done}}
7. Serbia, not Belgrade: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87/Archive_2#When_.C4.90uri.C5.A1i.C4.87_arrived_to_Belgrade_in_1943.3F The source does not say that in November 1943 Djurisic reached Belgrade. It says reached Serbia.] {{done}}
8. No mention of communists' intention to fight against their class enemies: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87/Archive_2#Communists_wanted_to_carry_on_with_the_revolution_while_.C4.90uri.C5.A1i.C4.87_wanted_to_go_on_with_the_uprising The full explanation of the distinction between communists and nationalists was overlooked and article only presented information about intention of Chetniks to turn on the Muslims and Albanians in the region without explanation that Communists wanted to continue with the revolution by turning against their class enemies.] {{done}}
9. Split development timeline: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Timeline_problem.2C_the_split_between_communists_and_nationalists The split between communists and nationalists appeared during the uprising, but developed only after communist defeat in Battle of Pljevlja in December 1941] {{Not done}}
10. Order of the Star of Karađorđe removed from the article [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87 link] with false justification. {{Done}}
11. Say where you read it [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Say_where_you_read_it_and_Citation_overkill link] The cited source was not actually seen by the authors of this article. Per Wikipedia:Citing sources guideline it was necessary to clarify where was this source actually seen. {{Done}}
12. Citation overkill [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Say_where_you_read_it_and_Citation_overkill Link] {{Not done}}
13. Possible source misinterpretation - The source talks about quisling forces (not Montenegrin Chetniks). This is also possible neutrality issue because text of the article blames Chetniks even when explaining that many of them were murdered together with civilians that accompanied them [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Charged_Language link] .

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1. Out of scope:
2. Militant Serbian church: [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#militant_Montenegrin_wing_which_is_led_by_Metropolitan_Amfilohije Militant Serbian Church] Metropolitanate of Montenegro and the Littoral is presented as militant wing of Serbian Orthodox Church. It is implied that it is because it is led by Amfilohije Radovic. {{done}}
3. Main aspects missing:
4. Family details:
5. Father's name [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87/Archive_2#Family_details Name of Djurisic's father was Ilija] {{done}}
6. Father's occupation:[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Serbia/Assessment/Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#1.29_Lede_improvement.2C_2.29_parents_3.29_.C4.90uri.C5.A1i.C4.87.27s_role_in_uprising_4.29_fate_of_his_followers_5.29_memorial_image Đurišić's father was also a military officer] {{not done}}
7. Marriage: Djurisic was married. According to some sources his wife's name was Persa. {{not done}}
8. Descendants: He also had children and his grandchildren today live in USA. {{not done}}
9. Italian reprisals against civilians are not mentioned, although Italians announced to kill 50 civilians for every Itallian officer killed. - [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Civilian_threatened_with_execution link] {{Not done}}
10. Confusion: [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Confusion No context about allied landing and disarming and capture of Đurišić and his forces.] Also: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Not_comprehensive_and_well-researched This archived discussion] {{not done}}
11. Wounded - [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Djurisic_wounded link] Đurišić was wounded. {{not done}}
12. Uprising in Montenegro omitted in the list battles in the infobox [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Incomplete_list_of_battles_in_the_infobox link] {{done}}
13. Command post in Montenegrin National Army was omitted in the infobox - [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Commands_held_.2B_ranks link] {{done}}
14. Voivode title: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Serbia/Assessment/Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Voivode No mention of Djurisic's title of voivode.] {{done}}
15. Order of the Star of Karađorđe - [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87/Archive_2#Kara.C4.91or.C4.91e.27s_star No mention.] {{done}}
16. No mention that one of the aims of Case Black was disarming of all Chetniks in Montenegro: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87/Archive_2#One_of_the_aims_of_Case_Black_was_disarming_of_all_Chetniks link] {{done}}
17. No mention that one Montenegrin parliamentary political party proposed to build a memorial to Djurisic and other Chetnik officers. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87/Archive_2#NOVA.27s_proposal Link to discussion.] {{done}}
18. Capture of Berane: There are claims that Đurišić's forces commanded by him captured Berane from Italians on 17—18 July 1941, during July uprising in Montenegro. Those claims are supported by many different sources, some of them written by historians with PhD in History and specialized in the topic. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87/Archive_2#Berane Berane] and [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Berane_II Berane II] {{not done}}
19. Đurišić as one of three "main commanders" of the uprising: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#July_uprising No mention.] {{done}}
20. Song: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#A_song No mention of very popular Chetnik song dedicated to Djurisic.] {{not done}}
21. Declaration of Independence of Montenegro: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Not_comprehensive_and_well-researched link] {{done}}
22. Change of policy of British government toward Chetniks and partisans: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Not_comprehensive_and_well-researched No mention. It is necessary to place the subject in the appropriate context.] {{not done}}
23. Plan for establishment of the union of Serbia and Montenegro: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Not_comprehensive_and_well-researched No mention. It is necessary to place the subject in appropriate context.] {{done}}
24. Leftist errors (Yugoslavia) - Without presenting this policy pursued by communists in Montenegro, it is not possible to completely understand the reason for split and conflict between Partisans and Chetniks in this region. ([https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Leftist_errors link]) {{Not done}}
25. Command post at Montenegrin National Army? [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Commands_held_.2B_ranks Not mentioned in the infobox] not done

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1. Iron Cross controversy: [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Iron_cross_controversy According to some views the information about "Iron Cross" award is forged.] {{not done}}
2. Cross vs. Star (6:1): [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Iron_Cross_vs_Kara.C4.91or.C4.91e.27s_star The text of the article says that Đurišić received two awards. Karađorđe star and Iron Cross. Information about Iron Cross is mentioned in the lede, two times in the main body of the article, in the caption of an image + collage of two images related to Iron Cross. Karađorđe star is mentioned once in the aftermath section.] {{Not done}}
3. [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#militant_Montenegrin_wing_which_is_led_by_Metropolitan_Amfilohije Militant Serbian Church] Metropolitanate of Montenegro and the Littoral is presented as militant wing of Serbian Orthodox Church. It is implied that it is because it is led by Amfilohije Radovic. {{done}}
4. [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87#Mentality_of_the_Montenegrin_nationalists Certain mentality is attributed to Montenegrin nationalists] {{not done}}

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• Unstable. The article is not stable. Dozens of major flaws were identified during the review. Numerous content disputes still unresolved. {{Not done}}

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| [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Pavle_%C4%90uri%C5%A1i%C4%87&oldid=859716350#Why_Djurisic's_troops_were_%22separated_from_the_Germans%22 Đurišić decided to move to Slovenia?]