User talk:0limits

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-- RoySmith (talk) 18:36, 31 August 2019 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=I apologise for the cursory review the first time. Now that I've read this closer, I see it has the more serious problem of being written in an way that advocates a particular point of view. Wording such as:

• mistakenly referred to as
• suffered similar acts
• despite this false concept
• random murders and aggressive kurdification strategies

are all promoting a particular view of world events. I'm not saying these things didn't happen, but when writing encyclopedia articles about this sort of topic, you need to be careful to comply with WP:NPOV; this article doesn't.

Looking over [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Draft:Assyrian_Jews&action=history the revision history], the original edit summary, {{tq|...In honor of them, I spent a lot of time putting together this short excerpt...}} gives insight into the bias evident in the writing.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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-- RoySmith (talk) 14:57, 5 September 2019 (UTC)

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Robert McClenon (talk) 05:33, 24 April 2020 (UTC)