User talk:AWTNP

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Praxidicae was:

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Praxidicae (talk) 15:28, 5 March 2020 (UTC)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Dr. Kadzi were:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission is not suitable for Wikipedia. Please read 'What Wikipedia is not' for more information.|}}{{divbox|gray|3=This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=This still fails on the count that it seems to read like an essay; but also that it fails 'what wikipedia is not', namely : WP:NOTMANUAL - that is to say that this page reads as if I am an employer reading a manual on what to do with my tips.

Please consider this heavily, or add content to the existing wikipedia page: Gratuity}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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  Kadzi   (talk) 19:44, 5 July 2020 (UTC)