User talk:Aliciamayer

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Asilvering were:

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asilvering (talk) 00:44, 13 April 2025 (UTC)