User talk:Amitwikia

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{{divbox|blue|3=This is a case of WP:TOOSOON - wait until after the release and the critics have published their opinions. Movies seldom reach notability before they have been released.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 09:40, 12 July 2016 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.|}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 14:20, 26 July 2016 (UTC)

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CatcherStorm ^talk 22:20, 4 September 2016 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=What this needs to focus: In-depth third-party news sources overall & Please No press releases, trivial passing mentions, news about funding, interviews, partnerships or financing.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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SwisterTwister talk 20:50, 27 September 2016 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=You cannot use Wikipedia as a source within Wikipedia. You removed the press release reference, but not the information it was referring to (you cannot just remove the reference, you must remove all the information). Make sure you are using reliable sources to establish notability, anything without a reference can be removed.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Garchy (talk) 21:02, 4 November 2016 (UTC)

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. {{#if:

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MatthewVanitas (talk) 22:02, 13 November 2016 (UTC)

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Ⓩⓟⓟⓘⓧ _Talk 21:18, 15 December 2016 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Visuality Systems. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 18:30, 19 December 2016 (UTC)