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Beermonk34, you are invited to the Teahouse!

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Hi Beermonk34! Thanks for contributing to Wikipedia.
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16:06, 8 November 2019 (UTC)

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Welcome!

Hello, Beermonk34, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few links to pages you might find helpful:

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Teahouse talkback: you've got messages!

{{Wikipedia:Teahouse/Teahouse talkback|WP:Teahouse|Submit draft article|ts=DES (talk)DESiegel Contribs 10:06, 13 November 2019 (UTC)}}

Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Canary Connect Inc.|Canary Connect Inc.]] (November 13)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Seraphimblade was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=More than half the article is a listing of non-notable awards. A highly critical article is used as a source ([https://www.cbsnews.com/news/canary-a-home-security-system-with-a-big-drawback/]), but not one bit of the criticism found its way into the article. Borderline promotion, needs to be written neutrally and include reliably-sourced criticism.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Seraphimblade Talk to me 19:49, 13 November 2019 (UTC)

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Hello, DESiegel!

Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Seraphimblade Talk to me 19:49, 13 November 2019 (UTC)

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Your thread has been archived

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Hi Beermonk34! You created a thread called {{tq|Submit draft article}} at Wikipedia:Teahouse, but it has been archived because there was no discussion for a few days. You can still find the archived discussion here. If you have any additional questions that weren't answered then, please [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Teahouse&action=edit§ion=new&preloadtitle={{urlencode:Follow-up to Submit draft article}} create a new thread].

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