User talk:Bolinasfrank

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:The Hardened Artery. Thanks! Wikieditor019 (talk) 18:14, 19 February 2023 (UTC)

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Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

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Valereee (talk) 13:46, 12 March 2023 (UTC)

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

scope_creep^Talk 11:52, 23 May 2023 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=He will pass notability tests, but this page has too much WP:Peacock, i.e. bragging. Please clean it up then resubmit.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Ldm1954 (talk) 22:55, 5 January 2025 (UTC)

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

If you have any questions, you are welcome to ask at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Tao_Xie help desk]. Once you have made at least 10 edits and had an account for at least four days, you will have the option to create articles yourself without posting a request to Articles for creation.

If you would like to help us improve this process, please consider {{leave feedback/link|page=Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation|text=leaving us some feedback}}.

Thanks again, and happy editing!

Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 05:32, 6 January 2025 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=Notable, but the draft needs to be rewritten. Please see: WP:PYRAMID. Kind regards, Spinster300 (talk) 19:10, 19 March 2025 (UTC).}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Spinster300 (talk) 19:10, 19 March 2025 (UTC)