User talk:Darzubair

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Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 14:08, 12 August 2020 (UTC)

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Nathan2055^{talk - contribs} 17:25, 12 August 2020 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Muzamil Mahmood. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 17:46, 12 August 2020 (UTC)

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{{divbox|blue|3=Fails WP:NFOOTBALL, has not played or managed at the fully professional level (being an assistant coach at a professional football club is not a notable position, neither is being the head coach at a football academy)}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Dan arndt (talk) 08:32, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

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{{divbox|blue|3=This draft, as written, does not appear to indicate that one of the biographical notability criteria is satisfied. If one of the criteria is satisfied, please revise this draft appropriately, with a reliable source, if necessary stating on the talk page or in AFC comments which criterion is met, and resubmit. It is the responsibility of the submitter to show that a subject satisfies a notability criterion.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 15:50, 14 January 2021 (UTC)

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Theroadislong (talk) 10:50, 2 May 2021 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Gogjigund. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 22:06, 23 May 2021 (UTC)

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Jeromeenriquez (talk) 04:18, 24 May 2021 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Gogjigund. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 19:04, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Stub-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. It is commonplace for new articles to start out as stubs and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Theroadislong (talk) 19:18, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Sherpathri. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 13:05, 4 June 2021 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.|}}{{divbox|gray|3=This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=A biography of a living person, especially a child, needs significant coverage in multiple reliable and secondary sources. In this draft, two of the sources (wionews.com and dnaindia.com) are identical; DNA India simply reprinted the WION text. That source is not an in-depth article, and the Hindustan Times source is just a brief notice. gaana.com is a mp3 downloads site which should not be used at all.

Wikipedia articles cannot contain text copied and pasted from a source, unless it is properly quoted and attributed. The "Biography" section is copied from WION/DNA India with only minimal changes.

The sources spell his name "Arafat Mohideen Bhat", and the nickname "Rap-kid" is not mentioned in any of them.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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bonadea contributions talk 07:11, 8 June 2021 (UTC)

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

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Devonian Wombat (talk) 15:43, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

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Calliopejen1 (talk) 17:03, 19 July 2021 (UTC)