User talk:Davidt1510

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 331dot was:

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331dot (talk) 08:25, 11 August 2022 (UTC)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Greenman was:

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Greenman (talk) 10:36, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DavidEfraim was:

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DavidEfraim (talk) 16:19, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheChunky was:

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❯❯❯ Chunky aka Al Kashmiri (✍️) 03:12, 1 September 2022 (UTC)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Davidt1510 (talk) 04:16, 1 September 2022 (UTC)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Johannes Maximilian was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.|}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 19:33, 1 September 2022 (UTC)

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Davidt1510 (talk) 06:12, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit§ion=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Pemandu_Associates Articles for creation help desk] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by RPSkokie was: This submission is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia.

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RPSkokie (talk) 16:43, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by RPSkokie was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This appears to be a duplicate of another submission, Pemandu Associates, which is also waiting to be reviewed. To save time we will consider the other submission and not this one.|}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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RPSkokie (talk) 11:11, 4 September 2022 (UTC)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Johannes Maximilian was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=The draft needs major rewriting in order to become encyclopedic. Minor changes in sentences won't help. Best regards, --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 18:41, 4 September 2022 (UTC)}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 18:41, 4 September 2022 (UTC)

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Davidt1510 (talk) 12:53, 6 September 2022 (UTC)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit§ion=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Pemandu_Associates Articles for creation help desk] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Robertsky was: This submission is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: promotional, advertorial writing style generally did not change from the first un-revdel'ed edit. wikipedia is not one's advertising platform. the current writing does not bring out the notability of the organisation. future resubmits done without the concerns of the various reviewers may result in similar decline/rejections, or even an discussion for deletion.

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