User talk:DevaneyJohn

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{{divbox|blue|3=This is mainly bragging and loose paraphrasing of his academic profiles.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 22:52, 10 February 2021 (UTC)

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Theroadislong (talk) 15:14, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

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TheBirdsShedTears (talk) 13:23, 17 July 2021 (UTC)

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{{divbox|blue|3=Well done on creating the draft, and it may potentially meet the relevant requirements (including WP:GNG, WP:ANYBIO, WP:PROF) but presently does not. Wikipedia's basic requirement for entry is that the subject is notable . Essentially subjects are presumed {{strong|notable}} if they have received significant coverage in {{strong|multiple published}} {{strong|secondary sources}} that are {{strong|reliable}}, {{strong|intellectually independent}} of each other, and {{strong|independent of the subject}}. To properly create such a draft page, please see referencing for beginners. Please note that being an accomplished physician does not automatically satisfy Wikipedia's notability requirements. Please familiarise yourself with these pages before amending the draft. If you feel you can meet these requirements then resubmit the page and ping me and I would be happy to reassess.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Cabrils (talk) 00:49, 13 July 2022 (UTC)

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{{divbox|blue|3=Issues remain. The subject is highly accomplished, but the article itself is written like a resume. Too many lists of achievements, publications, etc. See Anthony Youn for a better example of a doctor who is both notable and has a neutrally written article.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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MaxnaCarta (talk) 06:23, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

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Cabrils (talk) 03:43, 24 November 2022 (UTC)