Hi, I was surprised to see what happened to my GA nomination of this article. For some reason I wasn't notified at all on my talk page, so all I got was the one word "fail" in an edit comment on the article's talk page, not exactly a great welcome first thing in the morning.
I am accustomed to working through GA review comments with reviewers, sometimes for a week or more. None of your comments seem particularly difficult or serious, in the sense that a few hours' work could not sort them out. Quick fail is generally reserved for articles that are grossly uncited, absurdly uninformative, or fail to cover several major aspects of the subject; I'd not agree that any of those apply here, on what is a relatively straightforward topic, and I'd certainly like to have had the opportunity to discuss the way ahead.
I'll work through your suggestions now and (if you wish) consult you on progress. Personally I find the best way to do this is to have a GAN open so the comments and replies are kept in a place that everyone can find (rather than on editor's talk pages or whatever). So from my perspective it would be best to open a GAN rather soon, but I'm happy to wait until I've responded to all the existing suggestions. All the best, Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:23, 27 November 2019 (UTC)
:I would argue that lack of "broad coverage" qualified for the quick fail and you're totally free to re-nominate. I see your making adjustments, which is good, just keep adding more info and don't forget to expand the lead accordingly. I noticed you still have the website Indix cited, which is a retail site and therefore not RS - but the link doesn't go to their site anymore. Just thought of this though, but you could include men wearing them too. Disc Wheel (T + C) 18:05, 27 November 2019 (UTC)
:: Thanks, I'll renominate it as soon as I've redone the lead. Retail sites can be used with care for basic facts, as can all primary sources, but the Bloomberg ref is newer and more independent so I'll stay with that one. BTW I've responded to each of your suggestions on the old GA1 page. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:15, 27 November 2019 (UTC)
::: FYI: Renominated. Chiswick Chap (talk) 21:38, 27 November 2019 (UTC)