User talk:Doomclause

Doomclause, you are invited on a [[WP:TWA|Wikipedia Adventure]]!

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Hi Doomclause!! You're invited: learn how to edit Wikipedia in under an hour. I hope to see you there! {{noping|Ocaasi}}

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Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Jo Harman|Jo Harman]] (September 9)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.|}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Hello! Doomclause,

I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Onel5969 TT me 15:58, 9 September 2015 (UTC)

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Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Jo Harman|Jo Harman]] (October 7)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.|}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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  • If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Jo Harman and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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LaMona (talk) 00:20, 7 October 2015 (UTC)