User talk:Doughbo

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C F A 💬 19:33, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

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ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 09:35, 8 October 2024 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=Promising draft, but please fix the non-encyclopaedic writing style. Kind regards, Spinster300 (talk) 19:42, 2 April 2025 (UTC).}}

:Could you provide some MOS inlinks or specify which passages are in need of improvement? I'm not sure exactly what you're referring to. Doughbo (talk) 21:36, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

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Spinster300 (talk) 19:42, 2 April 2025 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=Still reads like a promotional resume, and some of the sourcing is problematic. I just removed what looks like a bogus source, and there really is only one single really secondary source here.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Drmies (talk) 20:27, 8 April 2025 (UTC)