User talk:Farmer217

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{{divbox|blue|3=The lead section is pure puff}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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KylieTastic (talk) 18:47, 3 October 2024 (UTC)

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Fancy Refrigerator ^(talk) 20:16, 6 October 2024 (UTC)

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{{divbox|blue|3="the company gained prominence in the post-World War II period as American consumers showed an increasing preference for personalized and upscale home furnishings."

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-Lemonaka 00:31, 9 October 2024 (UTC)

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