User talk:Jcollinsycc

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{{divbox|blue|3=Wikipedia requires all content to be written in a neutral tone. content like "oversees a highly integrated state-of-the art clinical and clinical research operation, spanning a 15-story facility in New Haven and Care Centers across the region, which now represent a pre-eminent provider of expert, compassionate, patient-centered cancer care" is entirely inappropriate and prmotional}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Theroadislong (talk) 16:54, 3 October 2019 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Charles S. Fuchs. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 12:31, 30 October 2019 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=Fuchs is notable, but the article needs to be wrtitten to show it according to WP:PROF. At present it's just a press release.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DGG ( talk ) 06:21, 8 January 2020 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=Remains a press release.

Make sure the article contains the full sequence of degrees and positions, with dates, and, i the most cited peer-reviewed articles, given in full with coauthors, full name of journals, and links, with the number of citations to each of them . And any national level awards--not junior awards or awards from their own university)}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DGG ( talk ) 09:58, 11 March 2020 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Charles S. Fuchs. Thanks! Sulfurboy (talk) 14:56, 25 March 2020 (UTC)

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Sulfurboy (talk) 17:30, 25 March 2020 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=far too much unsourced content, if you are being paid to edit please ensure ALL content is reliably and independently sourced.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Theroadislong (talk) 16:56, 1 December 2020 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Roy S. Herbst. Thanks! GoingBatty (talk) 16:30, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

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scope_creep^Talk 01:04, 26 April 2021 (UTC)