User talk:Joefrog4

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Theroadislong (talk) 13:40, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

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Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 16:35, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

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🌀Locomotive207-talk🌀 01:24, 25 July 2021 (UTC)

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Tol (talk | contribs) @ 20:22, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Cape Independence Advocacy Group. Thanks! The Living love ^talk 20:33, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=None of the cited sources are simultaneously reliable, independent, and in-depth coverage of the subject. Some are interviews, some are written by the subject's representative, and the rest are mere passing mentions.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 21:17, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

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TheBirdsShedTears (talk) 16:32, 1 August 2021 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Cape Independence Advocacy Group. Thanks! Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 17:33, 1 August 2021 (UTC)

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Cape Independence Advocacy Group. Thanks! Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 13:43, 3 August 2021 (UTC)

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{{divbox|blue|3=The sources cited may establish some degree of notability for Cape independence aspirations, but not enough for CIAG specifically. (Note also that interviews, passing mentions and opinion pieces written by close sources do not count towards notability.)

Many sections remain unreferenced.

I admit to having come very close to rejecting this outright, and unless the issues of notability and referencing, which have already been highlighted several times before, are significantly improved, this draft may be rejected at the next review.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:28, 7 August 2021 (UTC)