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Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Ross Petty|Ross Petty]] (April 16)
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| Hello, LJimenez2004!
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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Ross Petty (pediatrician). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 05:55, 29 April 2020 (UTC)
Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Ross Petty (pediatrician)|Ross Petty (pediatrician)]] (May 4)
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This page appears to have been written to praise its subject rather than to describe the subject neutrally. Wikipedia is written from a neutral point of view.
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If this draft is resubmitted without addressing the question about conflict of interest, it may be Rejected or nominated for deletion.
The sentence "Petty is known worldwide for his clinical and academic achievements in the field of pediatric rheumatology" should not be in the voice of Wikipedia. Other comparable sentences should also be neutralized.
If this draft is resubmitted without addressing tone considerations, it will be Rejected, not for notability reasons, but for tone reasons.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
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Robert McClenon (talk) 04:43, 4 May 2020 (UTC)
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Thank you. David Biddulph (talk) 20:33, 6 May 2020 (UTC)
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Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Ross Petty (pediatrician)]] has been accepted
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