User talk:M2020D

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Hoary was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=Entire sections go unreferenced: [what should be capitalized as] "Live action feature films", for example. Just what is meant by "domestic blockbuster"? Say it, avoid the vague "blockbuster", and provide evidence for it. "It also broke records globally including in China, South Korea, and Taiwan where the film became the highest grossing Japanese film respectively. It received high reviews in the U.S. and Europe." Evidence, please.

Sourcing aside, I find the succession of short paragraphs "In [year], he [blah blah]" extraordinarily tiring to read, and I doubt that I'm unusual.

Don't link to external websites from lists, even when there are no suitable internal links.

Are his novels really titled in English?}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Hoary (talk) 06:31, 24 March 2021 (UTC)