User talk:MGeitner

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Otr500 was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=Issues begin with the title. A part of WP:notability is what something is known as. While "FZG TUM" might be the "official" designation, being double acronyms for Forschungsstelle für Zahnräder und Getriebebau (FZG) and Technical University Munich (TUM), the lead indicates Gear Research Center so per "Naming Conventions" that should most likely be used. The German Wikipedia translates to Research Center for Gears and Transmission Construction and a [https://www.vdi-wissensforum.de/en/event/international-conference-on-gears/ source] refers to "Gear Research Centre". A second concern is this appears to be a part of the "Institute of Machine Elements" of the TUM where the chair is located. "TUM takes part in more than 20 Collaborative Research Centres, of which TUM is the spokesperson in nine". The reference in the "Publications" section states: "Chair of Machine Elements TUM Department of Mechanical Engineering Technical University of Munich". All of this leads to some confusion as to why a "centre" name would be chosen over the Institutes "department" name which is also listed as a "campus" on the main article. Aside from this the draft is too heavy on primary and press release sources. Otr500 (talk) 08:48, 13 March 2019 (UTC)}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved''.

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Otr500 (talk) 08:48, 13 March 2019 (UTC)