User talk:Ncornwell

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at User:Ncornwell/sandbox. Thanks! DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:53, 4 May 2023 (UTC)

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Desmond Haughton. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 12:15, 4 May 2023 (UTC)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Hoary was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=Dumping a list of references at the end is not satisfactory. Instead, you have to make clear which part (which assertion about him or his works, which exhibition, which award, etc) may be found in which source. ({{U|Theroadislong}} has pointed you towards an introductory guide on how to do this.) Incidentally, some of the awards and group shows look as if they're minor; is it really necessary to list all of them? (And: No solo shows?)}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Hoary (talk) 02:06, 6 May 2023 (UTC)