User talk:New Thillery

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Aaqib Anjum Aafī (^talk) 16:22, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=The individual might or might not e notable, but this needs to be written in the formal style of a Wikipedia biographical article DGG ( talk ) 20:43, 18 May 2020 (UTC)}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DGG ( talk ) 20:43, 18 May 2020 (UTC)