User talk:PhilA10
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:48, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
;;;; Hi Phil, Thank you for all your constructive feedback on my draft. As per your recommendations, I've started to look more into demographics and other factors influencing the effects of these programs. I am starting to find more Government Issued Press Releases on the programs and overall statistics about the programs, which is helpful in showing how costs are reduced. I tried looking into more controversial topics and I think I am going to just add an "In The Media" section because a lot of my writing would be summing an event up, which the reader easily could read from a newspaper article. Again, thank you for your feedback! MeredithMimoso (talk) 17:08, 21 October 2016 (UTC)