User talk:Piccafor

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bearcat was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=This is based far too heavily on primary sources that are not support for notability. For example, a filmmaker's article cannot be referenced to content she self-publishes to her own website about herself, or to content self-published by the film festivals her films were screened at.
The article must be referenced to third-party media coverage about her and her work in real media fully independent of herself -- and while a few of the footnotes here are the correct type of sourcing, the majority of them are not.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Bearcat (talk) 17:13, 25 August 2024 (UTC)