User talk:Rmutombo

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:LongBeachGriffy. Thanks! Ktkvtsh (talk) 14:21, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=You're really close, just a couple notes. Billboard is a great source for this article even if it just a list. What you need is some sources that go in-depth so the interviews are good examples. The journal article in Online Social Networks and Media only mentions LongBeachGriffy once in passing so it's not a good source for this article. Same with the masters thesis, we tend to want to see something peer reviewed and in-depth. If you have any questions feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. Dr vulpes (Talk) 03:15, 31 August 2024 (UTC)}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Dr vulpes (Talk) 03:15, 31 August 2024 (UTC)

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

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IntentionallyDense (talk) 20:44, 2 September 2024 (UTC)