User talk:Sachikosky

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Qcne were:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}}{{divbox|gray|3=The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

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qcne (talk) 13:17, 5 March 2025 (UTC)

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Sachikosky. Thanks! Netherzone (talk) 14:43, 7 March 2025 (UTC)

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Sachiko Hayashi. Thanks! Star Mississippi 15:36, 7 March 2025 (UTC)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Netherzone was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=It's very difficult to write an autobiographic article in a formal, neutral encyclopedic tone.The draft is filled with overly detailed explanations and details similar to an artist statement, promotional wording. As such, it is not ready for main space. Articles should be concise, neutral and cover key events in a person's life, not everything they have ever done. For more information on some of the hazards of writing an autobiography, please take some time and read through WP:AUTOBIO and WP:PROUD for a more comprehensive understanding.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Netherzone (talk) 21:47, 15 March 2025 (UTC)